fic: The Long Exile, chapter 10

Sep 16, 2009 03:22

Title: The Long Exile ( Read more... )

drama, chaptered, fantasy, jaeho, fic, long exile universe

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hi_yu September 16 2009, 11:01:51 UTC
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hi_yu September 16 2009, 11:15:50 UTC
i cant believe my eyes when i see this at hug. I clicked rite away. and true to behold, it's true. It's an update!!!!
It had taken a step ahead i see. not many opened but enough to move on. As always, I like the way you write. You never drag a story. every chapter must reveal something. nothing is a filler in your fiction so it's fulfillin gfor me as a reader, even if the time between chapter is unknown.
Btw, i used to be teachino, i changed my lj.
Hwaiting!

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chloe1910 September 16 2009, 11:32:09 UTC
Teach-chan, Just wanna wish you an early Selamat Hari Raya!

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chloe1910 September 16 2009, 11:31:29 UTC
Hey..it's nice to see this update from you. How are you? Your mom ok?

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chloe1910 September 16 2009, 11:46:52 UTC
What a beautiful and mystically crafted chapter....

I am convinced that Yunho is not the reincarnation but Youngwoong Jaejoong's lover, the king himself....I am happy that the power of love supercede's Jaejoong's desire to know the unknown and banish his suspicion and fear. Jaejoong should trust his heart that Yunho will never harm him.

Though Sarah's character is clouded with mystery, I would think she is a friend and not a foe at this point of time.

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kattan69 September 16 2009, 11:58:20 UTC
Oh goodie! You have updated!...I'm so happy...^-^

At least Jae now finally realised that Yunho loves him TTTTHHHHAAATTTT MMMUUUCCCHHH!!!...YAH!!!

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aitotchideto September 16 2009, 12:48:06 UTC
asdgskjgdfjohlalkjhoijsd;'kahsadfkjhgsahkjafd you updated this 8D
great chapter, your sarah helps me a lot to understand few things that i was confused about before. please update soon ♥

ps: this is the first time i drop a comment on this story :)

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anarcissus September 16 2009, 14:11:17 UTC
OMG IT'A AN UPDATE!!!! this story is sooo cool. that pendant/charm thing is so cool, always knew that there was something about it. the explanation rocks, really. n omg yunho is really the king (right??) complete with amazing powers and everything. LOVES.

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