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fic: The Long Exile {Chapter 9/?}

Mar 22, 2009 05:31

Title: The Long Exile
Length: Chaptered, Chapter 9/?
Author: M_K Yujji
Rating: PG-13, likely to go up eventually
Genre: Drama/Angst/Fantasy
Disclaimer: Though real people are used as characters, this fic bears no resemblance to Real Life and these people are not owned by me.

Notes: Inspired by the Tri-Angle PV. Though there will be a loose ( Read more... )

drama, chaptered, fantasy, jaeho, fic, long exile universe

Comments 14

eskiie March 22 2009, 12:49:37 UTC

Oh man. This series is just getting better and better. I'm always thrilled when you've posted up a chapter, and you NEVER EVER disappoint with your work.

kattan69 March 22 2009, 13:03:18 UTC

Glowing eyes....don't tell me it is from Yunho. So he is THE prince and not a reincarnate. And he is here in this realm to protect Jae....now this is getting exciting.

chloe1910 March 22 2009, 13:27:16 UTC

I totally agree with you. I think Yunho is THE PRINCE and he's back to protect his Youngwoong. I remembered that though Youngwoong died, the other main characters survived and some even came to earth. Yunho really did kill the girl and save Jaejoong...In adddition, remembered he managed to run back to the apartment in super record time to save Jaejoong from failing down from their balcony??? I think Yunho is the Prince. Makes me wonder if Yoochun is the knight and Changmin the reincarnation of Master Choikang, or maybe even Choikang himself...He is a very observant person...

kattan69 March 23 2009, 13:33:55 UTC

Oh yeah...I forgot about that...you are absolutely right...there is no way Yunho can run back to the apartment that fast to save Jae unless he is not human.

Now the plot is getting interesting. Just hope there more frequent updates...*keeping my fingers crossed*.

chloe1910 March 22 2009, 13:14:29 UTC

OMG updates!!! Gasp!!! I love you yujji ah!!

chloe1910 March 22 2009, 13:46:26 UTC

This is all so suspenseful...you really keep us on the edge of our chair...

BTW Yujji, I think there's a slight error. It's supposed to be band APPA mode and not band OPPA mode right??

kitsuneyujji March 22 2009, 21:02:05 UTC

I did indeed mean Appa, not oppa. ^_^;; this is what I get for staying up all night to finish it and then posting it on the run while I'm trying to get to work.

Thanks for pointing it out!

kitsuneyujji March 22 2009, 21:02:35 UTC

lol. And in less than 6 months even!

<3

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joms_hp March 23 2009, 00:40:24 UTC

HI first time reader here. I love your story. The suspence is also nice too. I hope update soon!

joms_hp March 23 2009, 06:43:56 UTC

Hi I reread the whole story again and I have some questions that I have to post. 1. According to the story of their past lives most of the people died leaving only a handful of people including the prince who survived. So if that is the case would leader-shi be in actuality the prince who decended to the earth to protect his BooJae? Because that is the only logical reason aside from Yunho being reincarnated and regained his memories and power long before any of this happened. And it would also would explain several things like... When Jaejoong told the story to Changmin about the Prince and the changeling and Yunho heard and they started discussing. Yunho there seem to know more than he lets on. And also the balcony scene, Changmin was right there is something fishy about it. Not to mention Yunho seem to know that what Jaejoong experiences/accidents is no mere figment of an over imaginative mind and he just says it is so, so as to protect his band mates especially jaejoong ( ... )

kitsuneyujji March 23 2009, 19:16:19 UTC

^_^

I can tell you that most, if not all, of those questions will be answered as the story goes along.

As for when I will update... well. I'm working on the next chapter now, so hopefully it will be soon.

ara_niey March 23 2009, 08:47:22 UTC

oh wow~
it was..yun?he killed that girl?