fic: A Hundred and One little Complications, Chapter 9

Feb 27, 2011 23:18

Title: A Hundred and One Little Complications, Chapter 9 ( Read more... )

gikwang, doojoon, yoseob, 101 little complications universe, au, angst, beast, fic, dooseob, junhyung/gayoon

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neitoperhonen February 28 2011, 08:17:36 UTC
Ah you updated~ this is a good way to start Monday.

So deep and serious but I must admit I really smiled at the cutesy kisses and hugs in the middle. I feel bad for Seobbie but at least he can talk about it now and get better with everyone there

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kitsuneyujji February 28 2011, 18:22:34 UTC
Yeah, Seobie internalizes too much in this series. Getting him to actually talk, in detail, about some things is haaard.

^^

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far~

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neitoperhonen February 28 2011, 18:25:15 UTC
My personality is like that and my dad's too. We hear quite a lot about it so I know, maybe too well both sides when being with a person like that. It's difficult to write too, or it's just me who has problems with writing such person. You're doing good job though ^^

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Yey!!! dreamer1219 February 28 2011, 10:14:34 UTC
Thanks for making my shitty Monday at work better. Can't wait for part II ;)

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Re: Yey!!! kitsuneyujji February 28 2011, 18:27:07 UTC
Mondays suck. Yay for making it better~<3

Well, I split it into 2 complete chapters, so Chapter 10 should be up by the end of the week. I need to finish it up and run it through the beta.

:x Of course, this is a heavy work week for me, so I might not have the chance.

Thank yoU!

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snb123 February 28 2011, 16:15:21 UTC
Great way to start out the week! Another fantastic chapter! I really like cute moments mixed in with the serious! Makes all the drama easier to handle! And I'm glad to finally know that Yoseob has a daughter! It was obvious that she was but it's nice to have it be official. And I really like that Kikwang and Yoseob are struggling to get their friendship back, that they didn't just "kiss and make up". That really makes the story seem so real. Anyway, totally rambling here. Great job bb!!

P.S. Totally loved this part!!!!
He walked over to Yoseob and settled his arms around the smaller man’s waist, letting his chin settled on one bony shoulder. He schooled his expression and gave his best ‘man of the house’ voice. “Did you pack us all lunch, dear?”

Yoseob snorted and flopped one hand at his head in a half-hearted smack. “I am not your ‘little woman’, Yoon Doojoon.”

“No, you most certainly aren’t…” Smiling, he nipped at Yoseob’s neck before stepping back and accepting his own breakfast plate.

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kitsuneyujji February 28 2011, 18:32:21 UTC
Thanks, bebe~<3

Yeah, I think maybe Seobie hasn't forgiven Kwangie as much as he'd like to thing he has. And for as much as he says he thought what he'd done was unforgivable, Kwangie expects all to be forgiven more easily.

I don't know if I'll have time this week to finish up the next chapter and the side-shot I've been working on, but maybe. :x

^^

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kitsuneyujji March 2 2011, 19:23:13 UTC
^^

Thanks!

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heavenlyjuliet March 1 2011, 03:27:37 UTC
Yay! My guesses about Soonlee was right! Though I do feel terrible for both Yoseob and Kikwang, especially since Kikwang's actions was completely unintentional.

Every chapter is such a treat to read and how things are unfolding gets more and more enjoyable to find out.

Doojoon and Yoseob's relationship is so sweet, it makes my teeth hurt. I love it, lol~

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kitsuneyujji March 2 2011, 19:25:19 UTC
Consequences tend to spiral away from a person like that. Friends and family are almost always more effected than one ever considers.

^_^

Thank you~<3 I'm glad you're enjoying it!

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