fic: The Long Exile {chapter 6/?}

[kitsuneyujji]

Title: The Long Exile
Length: Chaptered, Chapter 6/?
Author: M_K Yujji
Rating: PG, likely to go up eventually
Genre: Drama/Angst/Fantasy
Disclaimer: Though real people are used as characters, this fic bears no resemblance to Real Life and these people are not owned by me.

Notes: Inspired by the Tri-Angle PV. Though there will be a loose

Comments

[crimeis]

OH MY GOD- I've been anticipating this fiction for so long and so ecstatic to have seen this update! This totally won over everything I was reading this afternoon. Well besides Iris Johansen, The Ugly Duckling but anyways that was off topic. LOL.. But I was in totally suspense and you totally had me on the edge of my seat. I totally thought Jae was going to fall off the balcony. My heart was pounding. Seriously, that was some thrill. Phew! Yunho came to his rescue. I really enjoyed reading. Thanks for another wonderful update. I'm totally left in suspense and again in anticipation for the next chapter. :D

Thank you! Take care of yourself.

[crimeis]

*slaps self* I noticed I used so many 'totally'- Haha because I love this fiction. XD

[crystaldee]

Dear!!! Been waiting for this update since the last update!!! ^___^

Gyah....
Now those "people" wants Jae to go back home...
Thankfully Yunnie's there at the right time...

Hm. I wonder whether Yunnie actually knows about their past life or not...

Can't wait to read the next update!! ^____^

[irerd_taga]

Ahhh an update!
"They're" trying to bring Jae back to the other world but luckily Yunho was there to pull him back.
Trouble is brewing in other world. Guess it'll go downhill ffrom now on for Jae.
Update soon please! Pretty please!

[kenaressa]

The scary bit is well done. ^_^

[chloe1910]

OMG! You've finally updated this fic! I've been waiting for this for ages and I've grow cobwebs all around me from waiting, hehehe.

I love this. For a fewseconds my heart stopped beating when I thought Jaejoong's gonna die. Thanks god Yunho came back to save him. How could jaejoong leave when Yunho and he has begun to realise their feelings towards each other..

Please let not have a bad ending. It'll break my heart..It's really cool how you noved this story from the song Triangle.

By the way, I think there's some typo error. it should be drag and not drug right?

Anyway, I love this chapter and can't wait for the next one. Please update the soonest possible!