fic: The Long Exile {Chapter 2/?}

[kitsuneyujji]

Title: The Long Exile
Length: Chaptered, Chapter 2/?
Author: M_K Yujji
Rating: PG, likely to go up eventually
Genre: Drama/Angst/Fantasy
Disclaimer: Though real people are used as characters, this fic bears no resemblence to Real Life and these people are not owned by me.
Summary: exile : noun 1 the state of being barred from one's native

Comments

[orionsroad]

... just before I hit off to bed... EEE! You updated more. ^_^ Thank yooou~! This is getting really intresting now. I'm kinda lost as to what's goiing on with Jae, but the poor boy doesn't seem to having a good time of it, whatever it is. At least Yunnie is around to catch him!

And randomly... Changmin the cabin crew guy!
“Windows all locked and blinds secure, Yunho hyung.”
"All doors armed and cross checked, captain." XDXDXD

[orionsroad]

OMG, spazmoid... I just connected something in my head. Exile... do you mean Jae was exiled to the 'real world'?! Now his time in exile is up and he's going back to the place where he's a changeling? Oooh, if that's right, I wonder what will happen to the other Dong Bang boys in the 'real world'.

[kitsuneyujji]

Poor Jae is definatley not having a good time. But at least he has Yunho, yes?

I can't tell you what's happening! But maybe it will become clear soon?

[fuu_luv_tofu]

save my spot~

brb~

[fuu_luv_tofu]

that was scary...

I would be scare too if I see a face pressed against my windows at night...
I hope Jae is ok...he seems really bothered by these weird dreams of his...
I do know that Yunnie will be there to catch him when he fall!!!

this seems fishy...
what has Jaejoong got to do with all of this? is he the changeling from before? long exile? is he...?

many many many questions...

I guess I will have to wait for your next update to figure out what happen with Jae...

with Yunnie's glare no one dare to protest...very creative!!! I like that of your Yunnie!!! And Junsu smacking Yoochun I think it was funny!!!

update soon!!!!
I will surely not miss any of your update from now on!!!!

^_~

[kitsuneyujji]

I will try to update soon!

No one dares to argue with Oppa when he is protecting Umma. ^_^

[hydeist89]

yaa *insert squealing 17year old* it's so....exciting? O_O XD...*can never find the right word for these situations* ..sigh..

I'm so happeh you updated so fast!~ <3 *pushes her bed near your computer* sleeping there until you finish it *_*!

[ai_fantasy9]

omg i'm so happy you updated soooo fast!!! and that face!! omgosh, it reminded of a scene from grudge...shivers...i actually screamed at that part... >.<

ooooooooooo, i want to know what is happening!!! i wouldn't mind if this was a movie =)

update soon please and thank you!!

[kitsuneyujji]

I've never seen Grudge, thankfully. Scary movies are something I go out of my way to avoid.

I will try to write quickly!

^_^ v

[joyciel]

Awww Yunho is sooo sweet ^_^!! Ah..and omg... a face in the window...that is scary...o.o Oooh I want to read more D=!! *bounces* Hope your next update come soon ^_^!