[FIC] Mirage

[kitsune_hikaru]

Title: Mirage
Author: kitsune_hikaru
Category: One-Shot
Pairing: RyoDa
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Professionalism, romance
Disclaimer: I don’t own bla... bla... bla... If I do own anyone, I’ll let you know.
Warning: Un-betaed. And there might be some medical terms I use, but I added a glossary to those who have nothing to do with medical field.
Summary: Nishikido-

Comments

[yunizhamasaki]

First: the title is the reason why I'm here.I thought i saw it before. A novel title perhaps but I don't remember so that's why I clicked the link. During my reading, I remember XD...the title is not "mirage" but "Malice". However, I'm glad that I clicked the link and decide to read this fic.

Second: Aww...the medic terms, i never heard part of it. How about if you make a note below the fic, tell us (readers who don't have medic background) the meaning of the term. Please don't misinterpret what i said as bad feedback.NO! It's not like that. But I believe when we read something that is new for us, then we get explanation, it's more interesting. I just said my opinion.

Third: It's a nice one. Workaholic Ryo is sometimes make me sad. But if he is happy with what he did, i'm happy for him. Wonder, does Ueda start has the feeling to Ryo when he still at Tokyo?

Thanks for the fic, Dalili

[kitsune_hikaru]

aaah, a glossary is a good idea... why didnt i think of that before?? *head desk* there, i added the glossary already, so u might can understand the fic more~~ ;)

oh, no, dear~~ in fact, i'm soo glad if people criticize my fics... critics make u improve, n i'm DYING to get at least one~~
*hugs, kisses, flowers and confetti to u*
thank u soooooooooooo much~~ XD

n i know... it worried me too much when i read he fainted during rehearsal around 2010... like, he really should take a break.. n the way yoko said he would still smile even when he's extremely tired, i feel like hugging him... T___________________T
i wonder when ueda started to like ryo too... lol~~ n i wonder who actually falls in love first~~ :P

thank u soo much for reading n criticising too, dear~~
*hugs u again*

[yunizhamasaki]

Oh *head desk* glossary.I forget the word to use.hahahahaha...THANK GOD, you understand what I'm trying to say. Usually only people who used to talk with me can understand because I'm an alien who come from Mars.XD

Now I get better understanding about the fic.Thank you because take your time to do the glossary (since I know the word I'll use it few times.XD) even you are busy with your work.

You are welcome and thank you again, dear. *muah*

[kitsune_hikaru]

LMAO~!!!
XD XD XD
dont worry~~ bcoz i'm from mars too~~ hahaha... ^^
-->random<--
*gets smacked*

[snow_meow]

I love this fic.

I think it's so sweet.
I love how in the end Ryo acknowledges Ueda's skill and his words of advice to him.

[kitsune_hikaru]

awww, thank u soo much for reading, hon~~
glad u liked it~~
*hugss*
n yeah, ryo is slowly loosen around ueda along the fic actually~~ ;)

P/S: I added a glossary for those who arent from medical field so u'll understand the story more... ;)

[tkrp_sukiq]

you're a great ryoda fic writer ! why would you ever say that you're not?
but i felt that ryo could have been a little more of an asshole :P
your straight to the point fics are great and with that said, i really do hope to read more ryoda fics from you :)

woah medical terms.... i only understand a little (coz i study bio) but it'll cool to see that what i study appears in a fic~~

an great fic to end off my day , thanks for sharing ^_^

[kitsune_hikaru]

really?? *blush*
well... tbh, this is like one of my first attempt... lol~ this is my second ryoda fic in my whole life and the first wasnt even a romance one... haha...
ikr~~ i think ryo is a bit more snarky too... but i have no idea how to turn him into one~ lol~ *failed*
see, i told u i'm pretty much sucked at this... maybe i should try again next time... ^^

n thank u sooo much for reading too, dear~~ glad u liked it~~ ;)

P/S: I added a glossary for those who arent from medical field so u'll understand the story more... ;)

[deshisoraba]

Well, i don't really understand RyoDa but i read it occasionally and I really enjoyed the one you wrote here. It was so sweet, though was probably the hardest fic to comprehend because of the medical terminology. A hardworking Ryo is not difficult to imagine, though it was hard to imagine Ueda as a nurse because he usually looks like one who needs nursing. :)

Thank you!

[kitsune_hikaru]

lmao~!!! u dont understand ryoda?? lol~~ i understand though, that's why i said they challenged the imagination~~ some good ryoda fics almost make it sounded too real n i was extremely amazed with their writings... i wonder if i can write something like that in the future too~~ O________________O

I KNOW~~~~~~ *________________________*
i kinda felt it would be more suitable if ueda was the patient instead... lol~~ but the prompt asked for a doctor/nurse relationship so i need to go with it... n if ueda was a patient it would be some kind of forbidden relationship then, lmao~~ but indeed, it's sooo hard to write ueda here... -_-"

thank u so much for reading though~~
*hugssssss*

P/S: I added a glossary for those who arent from medical field so u'll understand the story more... ;)

[pautami]

I don't know why you said you are not a good Ryoda writer because if I base it on this fic, you're a damn good one!

You were able to portray Ryo and Ueda well. Ryo being his workaholic self, working in two hospitals like he works with two bands, but working with passion. While Ueda, likes working on something that he loves to do. Two thumbs up for that! ^_^

I like how Tatsuya showed his concern over Nishikido's health but still sounding like he doesn't care and how Ryo missed Tatsuya when he was transferred. And finally Ryo taking it upon himself and following Tatsuya.

But I have to be honest, I skipped some of the medical terms because I got nosebleeds. O.o Don't worry, that's how they are supposed to talk since they are in the medical field so I understand why it has to be written like that. I like reading these kind of fics because you learn something new too.

Thank you for sharing this and I hope I read more Ryoda fics from you.

[kitsune_hikaru]

aaah, really?? *blush deeply*
u're exaggerating~~ *copying ryo's tone* lol~~ :P

thank u so much for reading, dear~~
glad u liked it~~
n thanks for the awesome comment~ it's good to know people noticed the subtle things u tried to weave in a fic... ;)

btw, u got nosebleed?? OMG i'm soooooo sorry~!!!
T______________________T

P/S: I added a glossary for those who arent from medical field so u'll understand the story more... ;)