Should

[kitschobrien]

              The air was laden with the lingering smells of sex, guilt, and perfume. The heavy, olive drapes had been drawn, and thick rain clouds loomed outside the large windows, discolouring the bedroom with gloomy grey. Malfoy was artfully sprawled on the ludicrously expensive, black sheets, naked as the day he was born and completely

Comments

[noeon]

I almost pitied Harry. Almost. But he has his rewards :)

This had been the first mission he’d had in six years where he was required to be gone for such a long period, and he’d felt positively alive away from the ennui he’d come to call home. His stomach lurched at that implication.

This I loved.

[kitschobrien]

Thanks, hun. This was originally a much, much longer story, but then I restarted and it turned into Fragile Tension. So, yeah, it started off a bit deeper.

[cynaga]

well done~!

fun, sassy piece

[kitschobrien]

Thanks! <3

[dezra]

I know he's married, but I'm so happy he turned toward those stairs. You wrote a very good story, really enjoyed it.

[kitschobrien]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed.

[lilyginny27]

Good choice, Harry. :)

[kitschobrien]

Definitely.

[geneva2010]

Good mood, very compact. It worked as a shorter piece, although I could see how there could be more before and more after. Thanks for sharing, because this deserved to see the light of day. The sex in the foyer with clothes on naked was hawt! Methinks Harry is a little obsessed.

[kitschobrien]

We all know Harry's obsessed with Draco. Glad you liked it; I'm still on the fence about it myself.