Forbidden Fruit [Part two]

Jun 25, 2011 01:46

Forbidden Fruit
Prologue [Part 2/?]
Ruki/Reita
Rated R
The city; dark, crowded, mechanical, toxic.
Akira moves to the city after the death of his father. What he finds is something forbidden, something he cannot resist.
[note: Alright, so this obviously isn't my best work. I had to rewrite a large portion of it due to the failure of technology and I was ( Read more... )

reitaxruki, reituki, ruki, forbidden, reita, fanfiction

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kitokoi June 25 2011, 06:05:30 UTC
yea... reita kinda surprised me too. >.>
but he is a manly man, ya know. XP

thank you hon. you made me feel better about putting it up. ;w;

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bloodwolfgirl June 25 2011, 07:31:02 UTC
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I loved this chapter, it was amazing ;A;
Oh my Gosh, slutty Ruki, I approve~
Seriously though, awesome job!

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kitokoi June 25 2011, 07:48:09 UTC
ahhh thanks. i was worried about it to be honest.. what happened earlier just.. ugh. but i'm glad you liked. ;w;

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happykawaiiday June 25 2011, 08:40:18 UTC
yyyyyyyyyaaaayyyyyy awesome much?? why are you so awesome????????

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kitokoi June 26 2011, 09:18:05 UTC
oh stop it you. <33

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the_rnr June 25 2011, 15:52:08 UTC
YOU NEED TO UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER LIKE NOW!

I swear I'm already loving this story! And bookmarking it! And checking for updates!
And Holy shyt! I'm loving this slutty Ruki! <3

Can't wait for next chapter! <333 need to know what's going to happen! >

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kitokoi June 26 2011, 09:20:08 UTC
I'M NOT SURE WHEN I WILL THOUGH.

i'm going to be focusing on bitter/sweet again, so maybe after that.

but i'm glad you enjoyed and thank you so much for reading! <333

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the_rnr June 26 2011, 14:13:11 UTC
No problem! Love your fics! ♥♥♥

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sylvie_asv June 25 2011, 18:59:38 UTC
oooh.. interesting... :D
keep it up :D hehehe~~

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kitokoi June 26 2011, 09:20:21 UTC
thank you dearie. <3333

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