H50 fic: Hey Man, Nice Shot

Dec 16, 2012 08:47

Title: Hey Man, Nice Shot
Author: kitmerlot1213
Recipient: lou_c
Word Count: 2475
Rating: R (for some violence)
Disclaimer: This story is for fun and no profit.  I do not own any of these characters --I'm just borrowing them briefly.
Warnings: Spoilers for episode 3x10 Huaka'l Kula and some swearing
Summary: Just like in episode 3.10, Steve and Danny ( Read more... )

romance, short story, steve mcgarrett, mystery, camp fire girls, fic: hey man nice shot, action adventure, hawaii five-0, danny williams

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superbadgirl December 16 2012, 17:57:36 UTC
I can totally buy Danny's being remorseful about inviting Steve along (I mean, come on. Steve.) I can also buy him needing to learn moves to ward off people who assume because one is small, they are without defenses. Go badass Danny!

This was a very sweet read, thank you for sharing!

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kitmerlot1213 December 16 2012, 22:57:51 UTC
Thank you for reading and reviewing--it is very much appreciated :)

And I can imagine how difficult Danny's teenage years were--everyone else around him is growing taller and he's been the same height since grade school, so he had to learn pretty early how to defend himself.

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rungirl60 December 16 2012, 18:21:21 UTC
Yeah, this was even better than the show! Although I thought Danny was pretty badass to have a bullet removed with no anesthesia, and then to help everyone escape from the locked building, and then to go trampling off into the jungle to save random guy who was shot and to save Steve in the nick of time!

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kitmerlot1213 December 16 2012, 22:54:27 UTC
THanks for the lovely review :)

And yes, I agree that in the actual episode, Danny was fabulous in how he handled all of the crisis thrown his way. I find that he has a tendency to be quietly badass which makes him beyond cool :)

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kitmerlot1213 December 16 2012, 22:50:12 UTC
Thank you, I appreciate your lovely and kind review :):)

And yes, Danny is just as badass as Steve and I think Steve's always known it--that's why he forced Danny to be his partner--Steve didn't want him as an enemy :)

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kitmerlot1213 December 17 2012, 03:03:20 UTC
Too cool :):)

This is how I think about it--Steve who has been in Navy Intelligence and then a SEAL would have to have some extremely badass people for his back up--hence Danny and all of his BAMF glory :):)

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antivol December 16 2012, 19:35:03 UTC
I enjoyed very much this camping trip in Danny's point of view! Danny was great, both in his insecurities and his badassery! I can totally imagine him learning to defend himself with words and fists very young! I also loved Steve's glee and his teaming teaming with Grace, and then the way they both were proud of Danny. Great story, and thanks for sharing!

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kitmerlot1213 December 16 2012, 22:46:15 UTC
Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave a review :)

I think Danny is a person who first tries to talk his way out of a fight, but if push comes to shove, he is more than capeable of defending himself.

Grace is never not proud of her Danno and Steve is always gleeful when it turns out that his team is as badass as he is :)

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finduilas_clln December 16 2012, 21:38:22 UTC
Heeeee! Adorable. :)

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kitmerlot1213 December 16 2012, 22:42:19 UTC
Thanks, I appreciate the kind words and I love your icon!

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finduilas_clln December 17 2012, 21:35:38 UTC
Thank you! You can take it as well, if you'd like. :)

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kitmerlot1213 December 18 2012, 02:31:17 UTC
You are too awesome--thanks for the icon offer :)

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