Title: Somebody Told Me
Genre: Kingdom Hearts, AU
Rating: PG14
Pairing: Naminé/Marluxia, Axel/Roxas, Sora/Riku/Kairi
Main Characters: Sora, Roxas, Naminé
Summary: Sora was born into this world, but Roxas and Naminé weren’t so lucky. Thankfully, Sora is generous and gives their souls a place to stay.
Prelude “Breaking My Back Just To Know Your
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Rob: I'm surprised there isn't more multiplicity in KH, considering how often it springs up in that world. I'm glad I managed to portray it well enough to make it real for you--I always hate when other writers bring in something with a character and then make it completely one dimensional, so I work hard to make the characters work like they would in a real world setting.
What I was trying to show, by using the physical traits was to give the characters definite personality beyond what one sees at first glance: yes, Marluxia has brownish hair, but it's a warm and soft brown, like feathers, but his eyes are sharp like knives, giving him that duo nature that many writers fail to show. Also, with Sora, Roxas, and Namine I was trying to show, without using names (can you tell that I don't like names much?), that while they share the same body, each use it completely differently. I suppose I should work on this idea more to ( ... )
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Rob: I was only joking about the names, but I find that a lot of writers use names constantly as cop-outs for actually describing how the character looks and feels. You make a good point about my overuse, that there's way too much repeating of the same exact thing without any change, causing the story to be dragged down in repeated terms and far too many words. (Hmm, Kairi's hair isn't really 'warm' though, it's like ash, cooling down from the flame ( ... )
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