Comments | kitfallen: The Fourth

kitfallen

The Fourth

Jul 04, 2008 20:11

Title: The Fourth
Genre: Kingdom Hearts, AU
Rating: PG
Pairing: Axel/Roxas, Zexion/Demyx
Summary: A Fourth of July with Roxas, Axel, Demyx, and Zexion. Oneshot.

( “Fireworks…” Axel rolled down the chair, nearing a puddle of satisfied flesh and bones. )

kh: zexion/demyx, fanfic, kh: au, kh: axel/roxas, fanfic: kingdom hearts, rating: pg

Comments 4

shinzuku July 15 2008, 23:06:28 UTC

That was pretty. I like the last line.

kitfallen July 20 2008, 07:36:39 UTC

Thank you, it was my favorite line in the oneshot.

felicitywishe August 4 2008, 19:47:22 UTC

I agree, the last line was great. :D
I love how Axel wanted to watch the fireworks and Demyx the rain. It's such a beautiful image! >O

kitfallen August 5 2008, 03:36:14 UTC

You know for a spur of the moment drabble based on true events and not even planned... It's a very a well-thought-out oneshot.

My mind is obviously a scarily interesting place.

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :3