Comments | kitakatzz: randomly, a NUMB3RS fanfic.

kitakatzz

randomly, a NUMB3RS fanfic.

Sep 26, 2008 11:46

title: Freak
characters: Charlie. Don.
word count: 300
genre: gen
rating: PG-13
warnings: death
spoilers: none
summary: Charlie finds Don, and it's downhill from there.

( He's cold to the touch when you find him. )

fic

Comments 9

1trackmind September 26 2008, 22:06:36 UTC

I really like this. Poor, poor Charlie!

kitakatzz September 27 2008, 11:08:08 UTC

Thank you!

simmysim September 27 2008, 13:04:38 UTC

this is very fantastic, cause not once did you actually say what was going on, this is the showing not tell thing thing i was saying earlier like you're really good at that. I've never seen this show but the last paragraph seemed especially poignant considering the narrator. this is very powerful and honest, you should post it other places. (did he die in the show or something? or is this just a oh wait i just read the a/n, he did die :c nvm)

kitakatzz September 27 2008, 13:17:00 UTC

He didn't really die in the show, the whole scenario is completely made up. I haven't even watched any of the newest season, actually. but wow, thank you for the v v nice comment!

simmysim September 27 2008, 13:20:04 UTC

the whole scenario is completely made up.

FICTION.

kitakatzz September 27 2008, 13:21:32 UTC

FAN

paranoid_woman September 28 2008, 15:21:30 UTC

Oh, wow. This is really, REALLY good.

I can so feel Charlie's pain here. I love it how he thinks everything will be ok and then he freaks out and all he can do is work on math to calm down.

This is great. I'd love to read more from you. :D

kitakatzz September 28 2008, 16:31:36 UTC

Thank you! Since I haven't watched NUMB3RS in a while, I was a little worried Charlie wouldn't be right... so yeah, I'm very glad the Charlie's feelings came through for you.

and that is a very nice thing to say, thank you!

paranoid_woman September 28 2008, 17:02:46 UTC

Trust me, Charlie's feelings are really well written here.

*g*