being this close to her makes Vinnie feel 14, with hands too big for his wrists. He is *such* a puppy, I thought at this point, and then when I saw at the end:
“Curl up at the foot of your bed like a puppy,” he slurs back. GLEE!
“Make yourself comfortable,” she says. Vinnie chooses to interpret this as ‘take off your clothes. Which is why he is made of awesome.
She’s Venus with a dick. Vinnie goes to his knees. How is that so hot? HOW? It really, really is, though. And her leaving traces of red lipstick along his spine. I love how predatory she is throughout, even as she's all softness and earthy smells and coy smiles -- her bite even as she has delicate fingers, gentle voice with brutal push -- great, great study in contrasts.
And how she goes from her untouched state at the start, with flawless lipliner, to her cotton-candy pink flush at the end -- perfect.
;ksldgjk;ladgkjad;kjlg;klag;kjladg;jlgkl;jHOW ARE THEY SO HOT.
Also, aside from the hot (HIS LITTLE SOUNDS HE MAKES I LOVE THEM), there are some really gorgeous lines here -- "time stretch like new taffy" is the one that is sticking with me right now because it's so evocative and perfect but there were many others. In conclusion, a;lskjgl;kajglkagjlk.
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He is *such* a puppy, I thought at this point, and then when I saw at the end:
“Curl up at the foot of your bed like a puppy,” he slurs back.
GLEE!
“Make yourself comfortable,” she says.
Vinnie chooses to interpret this as ‘take off your clothes.
Which is why he is made of awesome.
She’s Venus with a dick. Vinnie goes to his knees.
How is that so hot? HOW? It really, really is, though. And her leaving traces of red lipstick along his spine. I love how predatory she is throughout, even as she's all softness and earthy smells and coy smiles -- her bite even as she has delicate fingers, gentle voice with brutal push -- great, great study in contrasts.
And how she goes from her untouched state at the start, with flawless lipliner, to her cotton-candy pink flush at the end -- perfect.
This was really fantastic. Loved it.
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This thing made me crazy. Thanks so much, hon.
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Also, aside from the hot (HIS LITTLE SOUNDS HE MAKES I LOVE THEM), there are some really gorgeous lines here -- "time stretch like new taffy" is the one that is sticking with me right now because it's so evocative and perfect but there were many others. In conclusion, a;lskjgl;kajglkagjlk.
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I do not KNOW how they are so hot. But they seriously are.
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