Waste Away With Me (RenIchi Ficcy)

[kisu_no_ichigo]

Title:  Waste Away With Me
Author: Meh, Kisu-Chan ^^
Rating: Hard R
Warnings:  Boy love, Smut, PWP, sorta... And lotsa fluff.
Summary:  Ichigo had been waiting for Renji to come home...
Dislaimer: Own Bleach? Me? Never!  Same goes for Everlong...
Author's Note: Its not my best work, but its not that bad.  I'm semi-proud of it.  But I love me some

Comments

[babyluw]

ah, wonderful. and I love this song! somehow I can only lissen to foo fighters when it's warm outside, and since it's finally spring this came just right!

thank you <3

[spikykun]

Yummy indeed ^^ I love the pacing, and that song - it set the mood in "fluffy", so the not-too-described smut really worked.

Two sidenotes, though - The tenses confused me a little. You kick off with past simple, but then there's a "Renji would reply". I think unifying all the tenses would make it flow better ^^

Second, and this is only my personal opinion, of course, as I've said this is a very soft piece, so the word "stick" in this sentence: "And then, he would stick his starwberry into his sinfully wonderful mouth" sort off killed the mood for me for a little while XD

Lovely piece, anyway ^^

[ruyu]

Look...I'm just going to ahead and steal your userpic. Everytime I see you post somewhere I'm like...Damn that's a hot picture. ^^

Oh, and I agree with the word "stick", it was an odd word choice. Lol.

[spikykun]

Didn't make the art but the icon is mine, and is yours for the taking ^^ (As are all of my userpics. Especially this one. Because we MUST SPREAD THIS MENTAL IMAGE.)

[ruyu]

Lol. I suppose I'll take that one as well *giggle*. I credit you when used. Thanks hun.

[ruyu]

Cool little story. ^__^

[zealot1138]

Your writing was so melodic - I thought that was cool. ^_^