AVALANCHE: Fall Line [6/?] -- PG

[kissontheneck]

[title] AVALANCHE: Fall Line [6/?]
[author] kissontheneck [aka fieryrogue]
[pairing] Cookleta, Marly UST, bromance!Mavid
[beta] Emergency heroes rajkumari905 and aohatsu standing in for the ever hard-working jehane_writes this time.
[rating] PG
[word count] 5268
[summary] David is on a nice holiday ski trip with his family. Unfortunately, he doesn't know how to ski, but a couple private lessons should

Comments

[rajkumari905]

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

[kissontheneck]

:D

[kissontheneck]

Haha, apparently you never got a final draft, just an in-between draft. Yay for surprising you! :D

I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS GIF.

[carolion]

ASDJGHSAKJDHASKHD

YESSSSS

"Who the hell is it?" came the indignant and sleepy reply from somewhere down the hall.

"Carly," Mike answered, which garnered a groan from Cook's disembodied voice.

"And David," Mike added, patting David on the shoulder. A startled "What?" answered, followed by a floor-shaking thump that to David sounded like Cook had fallen out of bed.

I think this was my favorite part, because I could picture it so clearly, and hear Cook's voice so well in my head!

also: yesssssssssss kissing and TRAPPED! OH HOW I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT SO MUCH

[kissontheneck]

Hee! If I can tell you a secret I will say that I giggled so hard each time I read that and seriously considered taking it out because I wondered if it was too silly. I'm glad I left it in!

KISSING! And TRAPPED! What will happen neeeextt??

[idolfangal]

Ngggghhh kisssssssiiingggggg

[kissontheneck]

Finally! I say as if I'm not the one in control here. xD

[non_canonplay]

Yay! You updated and they finally kissed!

[kissontheneck]

Yes and yes! Kisssesss! ♥♥