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Performance Evaluation [oneshot]

Dec 02, 2011 00:41

Title: Performance Evaluation

Fandom: Merlin

Pairing: Arthur x Merlin

Rating: NC-17

Word Count: 2,389

Summary: In which Merlin ensures Arthur has a good time, both at a work function, and when he wakes up after.

A/N: I feel like this was missing something, but I'm not sure what it was...*shrugs* I mostly just wanted to write merthur porn, which I think I ( Read more... )

#adventchallenge, ship: merthur, challenge: advent 2011, [oneshot], character: merlin, fandom: bbc merlin, character: arthur, rating: nc-17

Comments 4

ellebefore_emm December 2 2011, 07:08:09 UTC

I really enjoyed this.

The banter between Arthur and Merlin was top notch, the right balance between snarky and flirty, which added to the are-they-aren't-they of the first part of the story and the foreshadowing of the end.

Also the jokes about pens makes me think of a dragon made out of pens - a literal PEN dragon. Nice work. :D

kisslicknipsuck December 2 2011, 19:05:04 UTC

Thank you~!^///^

lol maybe that's what he was making jokes about?XD

meatball42 December 2 2011, 09:23:27 UTC

LOL. I can totally see Arthur abandoning decorum to shout at Merlin in the middle of a speech. Great fic, especially the end ;)

kisslicknipsuck December 2 2011, 19:06:06 UTC

lol Merlin doesn't really give him a choice sometimes...XD

Thank you:)