You Think You're So Great, Right? [prompt #11]

[kojafras]

Title:You Think You’re So Great, Right?
Prompt: #11
Length:10050 words
Rating:PG-13
Warnings:None
Summary:There are a lot of reasons why Yixing doesn’t like Valentine’s Day, and Yifan might be pretty much all of them.
Notes: I really hope whoever prompted this one doesn’t mind the side-pairings I threw in, but I just couldn’t help myself.

Comments

[krayaddict]

OMGOSH this was soo sweet and cute! I'm so use to seeing Kris tortured over wanting Lay secretly, this was very refreshing :) Jealous Lay ftw! The way Kris looks up when Lay's name is mentioned for the Valentines and looks over at him! I was squealing "Yes! He wrote him a letter too!" then the letters themselves plus confused Lay at Kris's confession. So funny. Yes, he loves you Lay, you're hot shizz, get over it! XD Great story!

[light_kira1]

Waaaah, thanks so much! I really wasn't sure if this didn't turn out incredibly boring, so I'm utterly surprised and happy about getting such positive feedback.
Hahahhaha, writing the letters and the roof scene was the most fun actually x)
Thanks a lot for taking the time to read and comment ♥

[yoonlove]

Ah this was too cute! I feel like all the emotions and nervousness of confessing to someone was captured perfectly. Also the whole thing with having a crush on someone in school was spot on! Yixing's denial reminds me of how I (and many of my friends) after in high school. This was amazing and I really had fun reading it! ^~^

[light_kira1]

Thank you very much for your nice comment >_____< I was a bit unsure about how well I did with this one, so I'm really glad to hear you liked it :3

[bluedreaming]

THIS WAS SO CUTE!!!! this was the cutest sweetest thing and their miscommunication and Yixing disliking Yifan and Yifan trying to impress him and Yixing feeling offended and everything was jus perfect ♡

[light_kira1]

Waaaaii, thank you very much for your comment x3
I'm very glad you enjoyed them being two stubborn idiots hahhaha

[jaerotic]

yifan hasn't found out yet that yixing wrote him a letter right?? i wonder how that went hehe. this was absolutely adorable, thanks for writing!

[light_kira1]

Yeahh, that was the part I had to cut for time issues ^^° I noticed at the end that he kinda didn't. But I think I'll write a short epilogue drabble about it, because I've already got an idea about that.
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting ♥

[tentori]

Awwww, so cute and sweet ~~~
Thanks for this story ❤❤❤❤

[light_kira1]

Thank you for your lovely comment ❤