across this great divide [prompt #10]

Feb 26, 2015 18:44

Title: across this great divide
Prompt: #10
Length: 1851 words
Rating: pg13
Warnings: none
Summary: Yixing and Yifan have always been separated by a vast chasm: the Apple/Windows debate. And the hallway on the first floor of the mall. They just didn't know it.
Notes: Thanks to H and J for putting up with my month-long panic about participating in ( Read more... )

kissfx fic event, day 5, pg-13, 2015

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mayangel7 February 27 2015, 23:23:10 UTC
This was really cute! I love the Apple vs. Microsoft disagreement in the beginning.

Maybe I could come over there and you could explain why the internet lied to me about macs getting viruses.
(Like that's your only reason.)

Thanks for writing this~

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kinkyixing March 6 2015, 22:24:03 UTC
thank you for the sweet comment!

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halcydonia February 28 2015, 12:30:27 UTC
This was wonderfully funny and sweet! I'm always tickled by Dunkin Donuts vs. Starbucks vs. Tim Hortons, Marmite vs. Vegemite, Apple vs. Mac, etc. debates.

"What are you doing out there?"
"Contemplating the effects of my defection."

Just amazing! Awesome work for your first exchange :)

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kinkyixing March 6 2015, 22:24:39 UTC
ahhhh, it was such a great prompt!! I hope I did it justice.

thank you for the kind words <3

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light_kira1 March 1 2015, 17:05:33 UTC
I have been over the Windows/Apple debate once too often, AND CAN I JUST TELL YOU THAT THIS IS PERFECT?
Istg I loved every. single. line of it. I laughed so much, because this all felt so familiar to me. Just the way you displayed the whole distaste for the other brand, but the way they disregard it because they're both attracted to each other and hope to not spend the end of the Valentine's Day alone - amazing.
Also this might be my favourite line of all:[12:53] Yixingle: Tell me you weren’t reading my profile on an android
I DON'T THINK YOU HAVE AN IDEA HOW LOUD I LAUGHED AT IT, IT'S JUST PERFECT.
Though it's closely followed by [1:15] Galaxyifan: 6. I hope you’ll be getting off sometime today, but when is your shift over?, because smooth, Yifan, so smooth ( ... )

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kinkyixing March 6 2015, 22:27:19 UTC
your comment made me grin for like an hour, omg. thank you so much!!

all of my friends in high school had iphones & I had an android, so we had cute little fights about it a lot too.

I'm so glad you enjoyed, and thank you again for the great comment <3

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rideon9095 March 2 2015, 13:19:55 UTC

I DO NOT KNOW, MAN. BUT I REALLY LIKE THIS. HIW YIXING WAS SUCH A BITCH ABOUT WINDOWS. AND THEN YIFAN HAPPENED TO BE WORKING FOR THE RIVAL COMPANY. BUT HE DOES NOT CARE BECAUSE HE IS HOT AND UGHHH I NEED SMUT FOR THIS

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yelrihs_jefan March 2 2015, 17:33:35 UTC
your last line, me too omg.

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kinkyixing March 6 2015, 22:28:09 UTC
thank you!! writing smut for them is really tempting tbh, I might have to do it now.

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yelrihs_jefan March 2 2015, 17:37:10 UTC
Words can't express how much I loved this. Everything about it, from the fact that they were working for Windows VS Apple to them being on okcupid lmao xD Their banter was A+ and wow what a first meeting eh? Lovely. ❤
((hopes for a continuation fic))

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kinkyixing March 6 2015, 22:30:37 UTC
thanks so much!! their banter was way too fun to write, I'm glad you enjoyed it <3

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