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Apple Crumble, Apple Tart: Part II

Jul 01, 2013 23:17

Apple Crumble, Apple Tart (Ron/Hermione, 12+)
Author: akissinacrisis

II: The Intervention

George and Ginny want to talk to Ron.

Index || Part I || Part II || Part III || Part IV || Part V || Part VI || Part VII || Part VIII

( ‘What are you doing here?’ he asks them both. )

{fic: apple crumble apple tart}

Comments 6

lhaggy July 2 2013, 00:07:50 UTC

Aah, the intrigue! I was just checking my e-mail when I got a message about this tag. Ron has never been very good at keeping his mouth shut, I guess, haha. I feel kind of bad for him though, I would have never imagined a scenario where Hermione ran away and left him behind. Not even being pregnant and scared or whatever, she didn't seem like the kind of person who'd do that, but it's interesting to consider that maybe she's not as centered and she wants to appear, because we know she's not that confident.

ANYWAY. I really liked this part too, again, can't wait for the next!

akissinacrisis July 2 2013, 20:20:04 UTC

Thanks very much!! Glad you're at least open to the idea if not completely convinced. There'll be more soon :)

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akissinacrisis July 7 2013, 17:36:03 UTC

Thanks very much! Yes, it will be mainly Ron's POV. There will be a little switching around later but not too much.

luna_plath July 7 2013, 03:03:04 UTC

*Dances* This was so great :D I love how Ron was so hesitant to tell George and Ginny the truth, and how Ginny was perceptive enough to figure out that he was hiding something. That's very like her. It was also very human of Ron to not want to know the real reason why Hermione left, I'm sure he's agonized over that very question for years and his exchange with Ginny really showed that. It's rare to find a well-written Ginny, so it makes me really happy to see how you've characterized her here.

I'm dying to see Hermione now. I'm also very curious to figure out how much Daphne put together from her talk with Ron. I added this story so I'd get updates in the future : )

akissinacrisis July 7 2013, 17:39:38 UTC

Thank you hun I'm glad you're enjoying it!

I am writing something else right now and am finding writing the Ron/Ginny sibling bits fun, it's a cool relationship to play around with. I see them as very close. You know me and Ginny...she manages to force her way into things even when stories are for once NOT about her, my Ginny can get very domineering!!

Soon soon! x

mollywheezy July 8 2013, 21:31:00 UTC

I ADORE Ron's internal monologue, and Ginny's mixture of exasperation and concern for Ron is absolutely perfect! :)