'Stranger Things', Dean/Luna, 15+

[akissinacrisis]

Title: Stranger Things
Ship: Dean/Luna
Summary: Wars make people do mad things. But if Seamus ever finds out about this, he’s dead. Dean and Luna, throughout Deathly Hallows. Charcoal, driftwood and fishfingers abound.
Rating: 15+ for sexual stuffs, and because Dean thinks Malfoy’s a cunt. 'Adult Concepts'.
Word Count: ~5800
Notes: jkrowling.com

Comments

[rubee_dupree]

You're so made of win, gosh. And this fic just made my day. Dean and Luna are LOVE and you write them beautifully.

[akissinacrisis]

Thank you!

[excitedrainbow]

And this is part of the reason I love Christmas. People drop back into LJ to bestow Christmas love and magnificent gifts like this XD

Oh my, where to start? Well, characterisation, chemistry and dialogue. Check, check and yep, check again. Dean and Luna are wonderful here - you've explored the potential other bits to their personalities that JK's only hinted at brilliantly - I can see Dean messing it up and Luna completely ignoring him afterwards - and gah, you know I love your dialogue (I'm realising that it's something I feel very strongly about...) and it really is no different in this fic. Seamus is excellent too, and I love his interaction with Dean and Neville.

I think nearly everyone's quoted the best line, so I will refrain, but it's the highlight of the lovely and realistic sparkles of humour, although the tension and anxiety that crackles through everything is also amazing. ♥

[akissinacrisis]

Everything I've written recently has been very dialoge-heavy, much more so than this. I really like writing it. Am glad someone likes reading it. ;)

Thank you, sweetie. ♥

[tunxeh]

Oh very nice. Luna is very Luna and Dean is, well, a teenage boy.

But you didn't tell us what happened to Dean's family after he left! ...or if you did, I missed it among all the Dean/Luna.

[akissinacrisis]

Thank you! :D

:/ No, I didn't, and that is a good point. All we shall ever know is that they were safe enough and clever enough to get in touch with Potterwatch. (I've wondered how they managed that ...) Again, thank you!

[akissinacrisis]

Thank you! OH DEAN indeed. ♥♥♥

[shiiki]

Whoa, brilliant!

I do so love Dean here, how very fumbling and scared and inexperienced and jealous and shy and human he is. There are so many facets to Dean and Luna's relationship in this that I'm finding it hard to come up with a word to describe how amazing it is and how much it affected me. Am I even making sense? Probably not, but do take that as a compliment. This fic has just got me going GAH INCREDIBLE!

[akissinacrisis]

GAH THANK YOU! ♥