five various comment fics | cook/archuleta | pg, pg13

Aug 14, 2009 08:34

excerpt His hands slide up the back of your shirt, fingertips follow the path of your spine, and you can feel calluses and the tips of fingernails. He presses softly against each bump of bone, as though he can connect them and plot out your destinies.
notes written for the (AMAZINGLY EPIC AND FANTASTIC) cookleta appreciation post over at ontd_ai!

They're three weeks into their sessions when David tells Cook that he thinks he's ready for something called the fixed firm pose. Cook thinks it sounds decently boring - and then David does it, and Cook stares at him in horror. )

my: fic, online: flist

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jehane_writes August 14 2009, 17:12:33 UTC
DARLING. YOU KNOW HOW I FEEL ABOUT THESE AMAZING COMMENTFICLETS. THEY ARE ALL TRULY AWESOME (YOGAFIC AND ZEROG FIC IN PARTICULAR).

WHAT I AM HERE TO ASK IS THIS: ARE THESE POSTED TO COOKLETA? I DO NOT BELIEVE I SAW THEM THERE. IF NOT, PLEASE DO SO IMMEDIATELY, OR I WILL TOTALLY SIC PRI ON YOUR CUTE TUSH.

ILU, BB!

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kissesblow August 16 2009, 05:33:21 UTC
THANK YOU BB. YOU ARE AMAZING. <3333

(posted in cookleta, btw!)

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jehane_writes August 16 2009, 09:04:05 UTC
I saw. Egotistically, I assumed it had to do with my prompting, but it was obv due to time lag, ahaha.

Still amazin' fic, though. +hearts+

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daughterjudy53 August 14 2009, 20:58:40 UTC
I could eat them with a spoon.

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kissesblow August 16 2009, 05:34:14 UTC
i love this comment. :D

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solacedoll August 14 2009, 20:58:58 UTC
I love the last one :)

Thanks for these!

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kissesblow August 16 2009, 05:34:28 UTC
thank you for the lovely comment! <3

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rajkumari905 August 14 2009, 21:07:26 UTC
These are all amaaaaaazing. Seriously <333333333

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kissesblow August 16 2009, 05:34:38 UTC
oh my gosh, thank you! <33

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kissesblow August 16 2009, 05:34:52 UTC
eeee, thanks so much!

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