Comments | kissesblow: the creased edges of a black and white photograph | robert pattinson/kristen stewart

kissesblow

the creased edges of a black and white photograph | robert pattinson/kristen stewart | pg13

Oct 09, 2008 10:35

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excerpt And then the woman behind the big black camera lens says, “Cut”, and that’s exactly what he’ll do to her heart. Even the edge of scissors couldn’t damage her like he does.

( but then she’ll tug on the hem of her shirt and wrap her arms around her torso, and he knows he’s crossed the invisible line that his toes love to dance along. )

Comments 11

goldentigerlily October 9 2008, 15:04:32 UTC

Wow!!!
I loved this.. It was so well written.. and simple.. yet so effective..
I really loved the photographs and thoughts about him being 'the guy', and the comparisons with her grandparents.
perfect Fic, well done!

kissesblow October 9 2008, 15:34:31 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :D

i_dont_mind October 9 2008, 15:31:25 UTC

this was excellent darling... and you're right, you made me a bit sad!

And then the woman behind the big black camera lens says, “Cut”, and that’s exactly what he’ll do to her heart. Even the edge of scissors couldn’t damage her like he does.

YOU KILLED ME WITH THAT LINE!!! AHHHHH

so sad... but so worth it. thanks for sharing this!

kissesblow October 9 2008, 15:34:59 UTC

Aw, thanks. ~revives~ I hope you're all better now! :D

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kissesblow October 9 2008, 19:19:15 UTC

Thanks so much for the lovely comment. :)

talim October 9 2008, 17:19:44 UTC

So beautiful.

kissesblow October 9 2008, 19:19:23 UTC

Thank you. <3

halfabubble October 9 2008, 20:48:54 UTC

Amazingly written, it reads like poetry ♥

Even the edge of scissors couldn’t damage her like he does.

love this line!

kissesblow October 9 2008, 21:58:52 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! :)