Blood Burning

Sep 12, 2010 00:30

Rating: R
Pairing: Jetko
Summary: This is how you remind me of what I really am.
Warnings: implications of violence
A/N: Written as a birthday gift for suzukiblu, with a prompt of Nickelback.

Fire nation princes aren't supposed to bleed. )

avatar:the last airbender, angst

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cenneidi November 9 2010, 03:14:36 UTC
Aurggaurggaurg

...I try very hard not to be forced to leave incoherent keyboardsmashes or gibberish sounds as reviews. But, you just made me do exactly that. So, damn you. But, also, thank you for a beautiful, short piece--The final line was painfully well delivered.

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kiss_me_cait23 November 9 2010, 03:29:15 UTC
@/////@

I love getting keyboard smash reviews. I also love receiving intelligent praise, and you have delivered on both counts (as well as highlighting my favorite line in the whole fic). Thank you very much!

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cenneidi November 9 2010, 04:34:37 UTC
Of course! <3

Keyboard smashes can be really rewarding, it just makes me feel weird to leave them. >< I'm glad you appreciated the review! I actually had a really bad day today, and so running into this fic waiting for me on my friends list was kind of the exact boost I needed. So thank you.

And, also, yes. I think the whole thing builds up to the last line, so it is definitely my favorite part also.

and, then, to be a typical little fangirl: plz rite moar nao.

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tsukiryuu November 11 2010, 04:29:46 UTC
Oh gosh, poor Jet.

Wait, did I just write "poor Jet"? O.o Wonders never cease! But seriously, Jet's world really is crashing down here as he realizes that Firebenders are very much people too. People who can choose to do right or wrong, and that maybe, despite being on the "right side" he's been doing wrong all along.

Good job Zuko! XD Although I suspect Zuko has no real idea what he's doing to Jet.

Now they need to kiss and make up. Hey, Jet hurt him, he's gotta fix it now. ~_^

Awesome job!

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a11i_sun January 15 2011, 05:13:41 UTC
Brilliant last line. You sent me shivering.

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kiss_me_cait23 January 15 2011, 05:15:03 UTC
Then I've done my job. <3 Thank you!

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