House Drabble Word Prompt #51: Water

Jan 04, 2006 13:29

Title: Crystal Clear
Fandom:House
Characters:Dr. Gregory House, Dr. Allison Cameron
Prompt:#51 Water
Word Count:100
Rating: Pg
Author's Note:Although I do not claim to own anything having to do with the show House this is an original work of mine.

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sniadecki January 4 2006, 21:53:03 UTC
With the foreknowledge of having read the next one, I have to say... two severe partings in a row isn't very subtle, but I understand why...

I'll give you points for riskiness--most of what you've written before this could fit easily into the current storyline. It was subtextual stuff that no one could prove or disprove. But here you're taking the characters, the whole world, into your hands and making direct changes. It's brave.

If I had to make a prediction, I don't think Cameron will do this. She's come a long way from season 1, with hints of much more development ahead.

But about this drabble... I like the connection you make, the dripping water mimicking her tears, and being themselves the tears House can't manage himself. I think that bullet of a response, "There is no us", is short and just about what I would expect his character to say. It's been his line all along, really. Denial.

Grade: B

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kismet_evenstar January 5 2006, 04:59:40 UTC
they went from one to another becaue i have some drabbles i wrote down on paper when i was without a computer. i was able to get them down today. i have another one to type out, as well as one for my H/C 25 challenge.

as far as the characters themselves, i don't look at them as who they are played out exactly on the show. yes, in season two Cam seems stronger (although still whiny) but there is still a weakness in her. the great thing is i can chose to exploit that today, and maybe tomorrow she will tell House off. (yeah, right. the closest i ever see her doing to that is dirty talk in bed. and she would have to be high. i wonder if she has anymore of that E left...) and H/W/C is never going to end. you can try, but never! so shove it! ( :P )

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sniadecki January 5 2006, 13:56:07 UTC
lol, spoken like a true author. :)

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kismet_evenstar January 5 2006, 16:10:30 UTC
well... aren't we?

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