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kiscico

Numb3rs Fic: Better Than

Feb 22, 2010 22:46

What's this? More N3 fic?

Title: Better Than
Pairing/Characters: Colby/Dwayne
Rating: R (for implied sex and implied light bondage)
Summary: Colby knows everything has changed, Dwayne disagrees. Set while Colby is at Quantico.
Word Count: 650 (4 drabbles, descending word counts- 300, 200, 100, 50)
Spoilers: The Mole, The Janus List, and Trust ( Read more... )

dwayne, numb3rs100, colby, numb3rs, carter!verse, colby/dwayne

Comments 12

emmademarais February 23 2010, 06:25:34 UTC

I think the descending word counts turned out awesome! I'm jealous of them - I like the idea that much.

This is also a really interesting time in Colby's life: he's still engaged with Dwayne and their shared history, but he's stuck in his spying and loyalty to the FBI as well.

I look forward to more Colby and Dwayne from you. No one writes them like you do, Drew. Bravo. /applauds/

kiscico February 23 2010, 06:36:33 UTC

I was kind of iffy on the word counts- I'm glad you liked it.

I look forward to more Colby and Dwayne from you. No one writes them like you do, Drew.

Why thank you! (Mostly, I think it's because no one else writes Colby/Dwayne, but I'll take the compliment anyway).

emmademarais February 23 2010, 06:38:53 UTC

I think I've seen at least five authors tackle (or try to) Co/Dw, so it's definitely a compliment!

kiscico February 23 2010, 06:42:01 UTC

Really? Who knew. Now I'll have to track them down and take a look.

melissima February 23 2010, 06:28:36 UTC

Yay more!

I like the structure of this series, but even more I like Colby's slow slide into the familiar - familiar things he's a leeetle bit less than comfortable with, at least at first. Bravo!

More please?

(yes I'm totally greedy.) :D

kiscico February 23 2010, 06:37:10 UTC

Greedy is okay. I'm glad you liked it. :)

rubynye February 23 2010, 14:45:48 UTC

Oh, Colby. I'll never tire of tangledy relationships, and that one was tangled indeed. Nicely done.

kiscico February 23 2010, 18:42:32 UTC

Glad you like the tangled!boys. Thanks for reading!

sky_blue2 February 24 2010, 03:40:29 UTC

Extremely well written. I don't usually like the little drabbles like this (I like the medium size stories) but this grabbed my attention all the way through and I'm so glad I stopped to read.
Oh and there is so not enough Colby/Dwayne stories out there - so thank you for writing.
=)

kiscico February 24 2010, 04:21:20 UTC

Oh and there is so not enough Colby/Dwayne stories out there

I know! I'm glad I'm not the only one.

Thanks for reading! :)

rambler75 February 24 2010, 10:57:25 UTC

This surprised me. I don't like Dwayne, but this was actually good. :)

kiscico February 24 2010, 20:26:09 UTC

My goal in life to have more people appreciate Dwayne. Glad you liked it in spite of Dwayne. :)