Comments | kirsten_faith: THEA 109 Paper

kirsten_faith

THEA 109 Paper

Nov 30, 2009 01:53

Here it is! The paper that got 3 of us *headslapped* by Twitter Mummy because 2 of us was distracting 1 of us!

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Comments 4

cartermackenzie November 30 2009, 10:21:16 UTC

Okay... sounds great... here's just a few little notes... have switched my WORD to US English, so hopefully only catching things that will make sense to US ppl ( ... )

cartermackenzie November 30 2009, 10:24:05 UTC

oops... missed one... possible issue:

"Find its feel, its taste, its smell and see what it looks like in your mind..."

Could be:
'Find its feel, its taste, and its small and then see what it looks like in your mind.'

Okay, shutting up... *grins*

kirsten_faith November 30 2009, 10:38:20 UTC

Thanks sooooo much! Took a lot of your advice and changed some stuff! It is better for your help!

Loves!

cartermackenzie November 30 2009, 10:39:29 UTC

glad to help. miss writing! :-)