Fic: Time for Reflection - The Dresden Files/Carlos Ramirez

[kirsteena]

Written for fanfic50, xposted to dresdenfic

Title: Time for Reflection
Fandom: The Dresden Files bookverse
Word Count: 656
Rating: G
Spoilers: Proven Guilty
Pairing: Carlos/???
Summary: When the fight is over, Carlos looks back on his one regret
a/n Written for the fanfic50 challenge, prompt 1, Heart. Unbeta'ed, all mistakes are my own. Set after the books finish (lol) I'm

Comments

[cyloran]

Okay, I've only begun reading Dead Beat so I haven't met Carlos yet but spoilers be darned! I couldn't resist reading when I saw you'd written another Carlos fic. I like Carlos' letting the reader see his discomfort and understanding his regret. I especially liked you going from Harry to the flashback and bringing us back with Carlos and Molly. :)

[kirsteena]

You're not supposed to be spoiling yourself! At least you are on the book you meet him in. But thank you. It was fun to write.

I'm surprised you're not bored of Carlos chatting away lol.

[saintvic]

I enjoyed this. I like the way it shows what we have seen from Carlos' perspective giving an insight into how he thinks about things. I also like the little glimpse into the future at the end.

[kirsteena]

I love writing established events from different perspectives. It's just one of those things I find fun, especially if it is from a minor character's POV.

And Molly and Carlos have to end up together. It just has to be *G*