Naruto; Uchihacest (Itachi x Sasuke); 1sentence completed challenge: "No Room for Angels"

[kirschvanille]

Whoop, update time again! This was originally for the 1sentence community, but I can't claim Itachi/Sasuke until the current person claiming it either drops or finishes. I started this about 5 months ago, hoping that by the time I finished (with much procrastination inbetween) that I would be able to claim the pairing. Such is not the case, since the

Comments

[matchynishi]

Oh, this is excellent. *__* I loved Sasuke's point of view in this; torn between his feelings and Itachi, just as cold and distant as usual, yet with a desire to break and claim Sasuke. Loved it. ♥

[kitanabychoice]

Hee, I'm glad you liked! ^__^ Sasuke happens to be one of my favourite characters, period. There's so much more to him than just 'oh, I'm all alone in the world *angst*' and such. X3

[joyinthedance]

This is great! You really do touch on the complexity of Sasuke's feelings about Itachi, which are not as simple as they might seem on the surface. Nice. ^^

[kitanabychoice]

^-^ Thank you, I'm happy you liked it!

[maxxim_huzzah]

Oh my, these 1sentences are excellent (you give yourself too little credit) :D My favorite is Blur -- it captures the hallway scene and reinvents it. I really enjoy the love/hate Sasuke feels for Itachi, and that Itachi (almost) always has Sasuke wrapped around his finger. *mems*

[kitanabychoice]

Thankies, I'm so happy you liked it! =D I really think that Sasuke could never completely hate Itachi (thus probably never being strong enough to kill him anime-wise) because nothing can erase the sheer adoration Sasuke had for him earlier in life. :3 It makes for fun fucked-up-ness, whoo.

[scieszka_chan]

I loved it. It's nicely written, touching and left some neat warm feeling in me ^_^. Interesting POV's, by the way.

[kitanabychoice]

^_^! Thank you, I'm happy you liked it.

As for the points-of-view, I tried to capture (as much as I could with a sentence anyway) everyone so that the story wouldn't seem too one-sided/Sasuke-centric. I'm teh pleased that you noticed.

[fallen_woman]

I'm absolute whore for 1sentences, so this made my night!

My favourite was #14, because of the utter truth of Sasuke being "torn between the lure of defiance and the complete vulnerability of submission." Also, because Itachi saying "Bend over" elicited many a pleasant mental image. =)

I really liked #16, as well -- I've always thought that Itachi's feelings for his little brother do run deeper than "foolish plaything," and you captured that.

[kitanabychoice]

Thank you so much! ^_^ I'm glad you liked it!