Fullmetal Alchemist; Roy-centric; drabble: "Dive to Blue"

[kirschvanille]

I remember posting this up at fma500 with no feedback. Oh well.

Title: Dive to Blue
Author: Kitana
Warnings: PG-13; implied Roy x Ed; Roy’s fingertips are cold, freezing, and almost dead to sensation. 388 words.
For: fma500 theme #35 - frostbite

Comments

[tenkenxotaku]

...I am getting extream emo thoughts, because I'm not sure if I am intrepting the ending right >.>;

Either way, this was really really good. and since it's royed, you might get tons more feebback if you crosspost to steel and sparks

[tenkenxotaku]

*extreme
*interpreting
*feebback

And I forgot to spellcheck before commenting x.x; [/loser]

[kitanabychoice]

Thank you, I shall. *laughs* The end is purposely left open to interpretation. ^_^ Whatever you come up with, it is.

[elystia]

That was so bittersweet. And it could fit so well into canon that I'm intrigued. XD; Wonderful job!

[kitanabychoice]

Thank you! ^__^

[strawberrykaoru]

Aww, that was very well written. =)

I love the fact that Roy actually cares and believes in Ed. The ending was very nice too, especially the last sentence. It...left me with an image of them reuniting. Whee. X3

[kitanabychoice]

^^ Thank you~~!

[inugrlrayn]

oooh, I likey

[kitanabychoice]

Thank you. ^_^

[swirleycool_fma]

awwwwww CUTE!! loved it! ^___^

[kitanabychoice]

^__^ Thank yooou~

[swirleycool_fma]

no prob! =3