Weird drabble-thing I can blame on Rashaka... lucky me!

Jan 14, 2007 22:32

Blaming it on this post at katara_zuko. Since this so mediocre, no community pimpage for my work. Just storage.

Totally not my fault )

mediocre, fanfiction, challenges, complete, drabble, blame-fics, atla, avatar: katara & zuko

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beyondthemoor January 14 2007, 23:13:03 UTC
Love how you brought this together, a lot of sensitivity on all sides!

I think my fav part is:
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"I could kill you all," he said softly but the waterbender only smiled.

"No, you couldn't. You'd need to be the Fire Lord's son for that," she replied.

"You are questioning my heritage? Who am I if not the Fire Lord's son?"

"The nephew of the Dragon of the West," she said and he could not argue with that.
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(Quick question, though, because I'm stupid: Who said "I won't be doing much protecting with this one, anyways", and what did he mean?)

Thank you for sharing-- for someone like me who kind of ships both Kataang and Zutara, it feeds both needs. ^_^;

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kirschreich January 15 2007, 07:21:42 UTC
Zuko; and what he means is that Katara can protect herself quite well on her own. He wants to make it seem like it's a burden, although he is actually quite happy about being saddled with the task (which he can't show, however). Now he has an excuse (Aang wanted it) that would even silence Sokka's objections.

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irrel January 15 2007, 00:56:50 UTC
PIMP IT. NOW. How can you say this is mediocre?!

"You are questioning my heritage? Who am I if not the Fire Lord's son?"

"The nephew of the Dragon of the West," she said and he could not argue with that.
God, that was so perfect!

I loved it T_T I wish Aang could be so mature in the show lol

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kirschreich January 15 2007, 07:25:59 UTC
Simple, really. I'm not happy with how it all plays together, how the scenes line up and the overall feel of it. Thus mediocre.

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irrel January 15 2007, 07:27:29 UTC
You writers are so picky (but artist are the same XD).

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kirschreich January 15 2007, 07:29:55 UTC
lol

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romanitas January 15 2007, 03:11:11 UTC
...mediocre? -_-;
Far. From. It. >O

"You are questioning my heritage? Who am I if not the Fire Lord's son?"
"The nephew of the Dragon of the West," she said and he could not argue with that.
Pointed out already, but it was just so perfect. PERFECT. :O

I loved Aang in this. Can't pinpoint why exactly, but it seems more plausible than the jealous "OMG I KILL ZUKO" trait people tend to give him, in regards to Katara/Zuko.

Lurved it! ♥ Especially the last line.

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kirschreich January 15 2007, 07:27:42 UTC
Well, he did have some near-divine help.

(And it is too mediocre. No pimpage if I'm not happy, and I'm not thus no pimpage.)

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loveroftheflame January 15 2007, 03:45:15 UTC
*flails wildly*

AHHHHH!!!! Love it!!!

(to incoherant to say more)

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kirschreich January 15 2007, 07:47:39 UTC
You say that about almost everything I write... I'm still unhappy with it.

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loveroftheflame January 15 2007, 13:38:19 UTC
Just because I say that doesn't make it a lie. I do love just about everything you write. Is that so bad? :P So you go on being unhappy with it and I'll go on loving it ok? Keep in mind that I love you too! LOL!

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drygon January 17 2007, 18:41:42 UTC
Omg mature Aang = <3
So cute. *grins* I loved it!

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