Kai as a coffee-boy...I like that . I'd make like Reita and be there everyday XDD
It'd be interesting if you can stretch this into a sort of related one-shots...with different gaze members... I wonder what coffee-boy Ruki would be like X3
On another note, I can't help but say, the ending sorta made me go 'huh?' It just didn't feel quite right ending it like that, with that one sentence. Don't get me wrong, I think it's a good ending.
Just that, maybe there ought to be something between the last paragraph and the last sentence? Cuz right now it feels like something's been chopped off suddenly =___="
Omgosh I can't believe this was written 5 years ago. How time flies!! Rereading this again has given me a new perspective too haha! Thanks for your comment too (I've not received any in eons lol!) - it made my day as well ^-^
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good job!
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I'd make like Reita and be there everyday XDD
It'd be interesting if you can stretch this into a sort of related one-shots...with different gaze members... I wonder what coffee-boy Ruki would be like X3
On another note, I can't help but say, the ending sorta made me go 'huh?' It just didn't feel quite right ending it like that, with that one sentence. Don't get me wrong, I think it's a good ending.
Just that, maybe there ought to be something between the last paragraph and the last sentence? Cuz right now it feels like something's been chopped off suddenly =___="
Sorry, I may have said too much m(_ _)m
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But, it IS a good story... Can I demand a cooffe-boy Ruki next time XDD
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