Radio 4/4

Feb 20, 2011 16:07


Title: Radio
Chapter: 4/4
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band: the gazette, pairing: reitaxkai

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sekiryu February 22 2011, 08:59:33 UTC
I like how this turned out ^^

The ending fits well, and the general flow is good, not too rushed or lagging.

Actually, I really like how you ended it, wasn't overly fluffy or dramatic, but really down to earth and quite realistic, considering the whole situation from the previous chapters ^^

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kiroyo February 22 2011, 12:42:29 UTC
It all took place within a day actually. A whole morning ._. Which is why I broke it up into 4 parts otherwise it would be too long ^^;

Thank you <3

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