And I've got a BIG Appetite!

[kirkangel]

I'm really a prick. Case in point: for poetry workshop, we were asked to write an ekphrastic poem (meaning based on/inspired by a painting or photograph). Here's my entry, handed out to every student, to be workshopped next week:

Anonymous Omnibus

soldering hours into motion
until she returns
completed, defined, justified

steel synapses, oiled veins
my

Comments

hmmm...

[anonymous]

i think i agree with stephen..although i bet your class gets a kick out of this mindless sh!t pie. hey, do a poem about shit p!e, please?

-doreeeeeensterrrrrr

Re: hmmm...

[anonymous]

BEE TEE DOUBLE U

notice that i put the ! in two different words? yeah, okay, i'm drunk. on life.

[mindlessidling]

most poetry is bullshit anyway

[aregularmess]

you'd be the reason i'd be a teacher.