Comments | kirk_mccoy: fic: Protector

guardgal4eva in kirk_mccoy

fic: Protector

Jul 03, 2009 13:10

John swallows hard as he faces Jim, spine straightening with ramrod postrue. The look on Jim's face is unreadable, and frankly, John's a bit afraid of the reaction. He can't lose Jim, a thought that completely startles him. In the span of time he's known the blond, Jim's become the most important person in his life, and losing him would be like ( Read more... )

fandom: crossover, rating: pg-13, fan: fanfiction

Comments 17

apagon July 3 2009, 21:31:26 UTC

this is too cool--okay, doom is now officially on my list of movies to see... will there be more? Thanks so much for posting :D

guardgal4eva July 3 2009, 21:37:17 UTC

I promise there will definitely there will be more. ^^

severusslave July 3 2009, 22:43:25 UTC

Alright, this is cool. :D

health_hazzard July 4 2009, 02:48:11 UTC

Fantastic once again. Now if only Jim could get some of the chromosome too so that him and Bones could live together forever that would be awesome.

guardgal4eva July 4 2009, 02:58:20 UTC

I was thinking about it, but I don't know how to work it in without it coming off as like, cheesy.

shingo_the_pest July 6 2009, 03:10:40 UTC

There's something so satisfying about Jim knowing. I loved the way this played out.

bellajayd August 20 2009, 17:29:31 UTC

This is a really great series you have going on here :)

Only one thing, sometimes it's difficult to keep track of who is speaking and that's because you keep all of the dialogue [regardless of who the speaker is] in one paragraph. Generally, every time someone new starts speaking a new paragraph starts. Doing this would go far to lessen some of the "who is the speaker??" confusion. It also lessens eye strain so the reader isn't hit with a wall of unbroken text. LOL.