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[kirishimaayama]

These three should have been posted with the last post I made with three stories. So... If you count the third fic post back or something. xD Anyway, these lacked an appropriate ending at the time so I couldn't polish it in time to post it, but here they are now and I can't fix it anymore. xP

Comments

[silentdictator]

Angels and Demons was stunning. The comparison of Mukuro to hell and Byakuran to heaven was kind of ironic. Although the beginning was light, the ending was much darker with such evil intentions! It was lovely. :D

Identity was sad. The ending depicted a future too terrible to imagine! ;A; But Hibari was very in character and it was a nice touch to add in those little details about class numbers and descriptions about Naminori Middle.

Serenity just brought up a whole host of possibilities for what will happen next! *__* Something happens next right? Because you can't just leave Mukuro sleeping with Tsuna in the room and Hibari slipping away under the window! I noticed a few mistakes though it was probably just a slip of the fingers on the keyboard. It was luckily; it was ruffling the thing curtains; Neither head the quiet step

[kirishimaayama]

It was kind of. xD But I was like, huh, white, black, dark, light, parallels!... And it sort of spun from there though what came out wasn't exactly what I had in mind. xD;

Thanks, I tried to add more detail I guess, to make it all seem more realistic. ('realistic' hmm) oAo But the reality is that I've never been in a Japanese school, so this is all just my imagination and anime knowledge. xD

I don't know? xD What do you think will happen? :P Open-ended ending. xD
Oh what, what is that? o_o; *goes to fix* Probably. I am really tired. =A=; T_T

[kirishimaayama]

Fixed! orz
I'm typo-ing so much recently. xD
Thanks. :D

[kirishimaayama]

Just like how Byakuran is one phony Angel, Mukuro can be a phony demon. xD I could probably write more about that. :D''

^^; It's shorter than I intended, but yeah. :(
Maybe I'll write more about that later too. :D

[mssekishi]

*pokes* Angels and Demons is <3!~
&&Serenity? ((: ILOVEYOUFORWRITINGIT!
P.S. I'd love you even more if you'll continue Serenity. XD Nah i shouldnt stress you. Haha. thank YOU for writing lovely 6927s!

[kirishimaayama]

Uhahaha, though I totally fail as Byakuran. XD I really need to go back and check him out.
I could do that (though, I get the feeling I'm forgetting to continue a few now... *frowning*) but I still managed to work some (unrequited) 6918 into it. OTL Eh. xD"

[mssekishi]

Ah. It's fine, really. Cause i know it's hard to portray Byakuran-sama's character. He speaks with hidden meanings. >___< Well i think he should tease Mukuro more. LOL. XD
6918...Hmmm, i can handle it. Heh! no no, i should demand for 6927 :P
Im just gonna look forward for sequels. Hahaha!

[kirishimaayama]

LOL, true. I should work on that. ~
xD Ok ok, working on the 6927. I'm getting more used to it now. :D
xD''