[KinKi Fic] Sync

[kireira]

For a piece meant to be introspective, this is a bit too fictional. =P Timeline is not consciously respected, either.

Warning for excessive sap, and long-running, repetitive sentences for those not tuned to that style. References / inspiration credits are hyperlinked; any interpretation error is my own, and I'll be glad to know your opinion. =)

Comments

[silver_lined]

Ahh, I loved how sweet the progression was, and also, SDK band member cameos! Tom-san and references to Takami-san~!

[kireira]

The original progression went into angst, which didn't quite make sense and thus was majorly renovated. XD

I needed someone to say the lines I couldn't make them say and Tom-san came in handy. >:D

[silver_lined]

Angst is sad! I always get all ;O; when things take an unexpected turn into angst, and I thought this had the perfect amount of lead up to a point where they understood each other without it being saccherine ♥

>:D Ahh, the supporting cast is handy. Mine's a greek chorus of MA. XD But, Domoto Band~ They're so rare for all that they're so fantastic.

[kireira]

Recent events have started me thinking on if/when they get married and I suppose it lent some bittersweet feeling into the writing. =| I just found that SDK ep where Tsuyo was predicted to get married at 32 and Kouichi at 35, and I thought that was looking pretty realistic. xD

Ah, your delightful MA cast. (I know them by name now!) Tom-san is another person that should be preserved around KinKi to increase their entertainment value. xD

[korrrum]

I really like your writing style. It's beautiful. ^^

To me your fic seem to be very realistic. All the things that you wrote could really have happened in real life, in my opinion.

And your portrayal of their relationship is so cute~

&hearts

[kireira]

Thank you, it is very encouraging to read your comment! =)

I think these two are cuteness itself XD so all my fics turn out borderline cheesy like this lol.

[hiroko78]

Love your characterizing of them here.
Seem so real and give us some insight into their relationship. :)

[kireira]

Thank you! Credits go back to all who have provided all those sources. =D

[misosiru]

It was niiiceee, but it kind of took me like 2 hours to complete reading the fic (laugh) Watching everything on the links, waiting for downloading, reading through and then I'd forget the fic so I'd restart. But other than that it was very entertaining the read after looking at so many KinKi Kids stuff. xD;;;

♥

[kireira]

Ahahahaha, that's what KK links do to us huh. xDDD Myself was also distracted many times while compiling these references..

[soulezz]

love the story and style.
the way you wrote it gives me a feeling that say 'it's their story together'...the same as Tsuyo i'm speechless right now, the only think in my head that keep repeating itself is...a story of their own...=D)

[kireira]

Thanks for the sweet comment. I guess that's the feeling I get from how they behave around each other, too.. =')