[KinKi AU] Tangent -- Chapter 6

[kireira]

Sorry for the delay. Life has been a major distraction...

Chapter count has been revised (again) to 10.

Disclaimer: This writing is fictional and has no commercial purpose. Characters are real persons belonging to themselves.

Pairing: KinKi Kids
Genre: AU, drama
Rating: G

Summary: Tsuyoshi the hairstylist was contracted to Kouichi the solo artist.

Comments

[gally04]

Awwwww can I say I love Nagase ?
I love Naga-chan xDDDDD

Poor Koichi is going through a lot >.<
And Tsuyoshi is as oblivious as ever xD And now there is even Okada between them ! Tsuyoshi and Okada are acting so cute together (^.^)

........ More ? *puppy eyes*
*looooove*

[kireira]

Of course you can, I love him too. <33

All Okada-Tsuyoshi videos I've watched are the cute ones =PP so the characterization becomes like that..

I hope the next one won't take as long. =PPP

[gally04]

I agree xD
Both Tsuyoshi and Okada are hot, but when together, it's full of cuteness xD Awww I miss old days sometimes ! Wanna see them more together !

I hope so too :p But life is life ^^

[fishings]

shjdajsdhasjdhsja new chapter *squee*

"Why?" Kouichi wondered aloud. "Why am I not in love with you?"
.____________. my heart jumped.

There is so much Kouchan in this chapter *___*

[kireira]

I wonder if I'm being cruel to Nagase. ;_;

There is so much Kouchan in this chapter
My brain works in phases =X

[jandeth]

Wiiiiiiiiiii~!
An update!!! YAY! ^_^
me likes a lot!

... I hope I didn't ruin your "duty-Free" with my incoherrent comments.... ?
...thought it's been a while from that...

[kireira]

=DDD

Ehh, your comments are fine! It made me want to do more things with that piece, though I haven't had time for it yet. =PPP

[jandeth]

aah good *relief* XDD

"Oh, each of us will just take half the head."
This still makes me laugh ^_^

[kochan_addict]

*Happiness*
The NagaKou session was so them!!!

And Koichi pinning over Tsuyo was gold!
Heh Ken sees right through them. V6 win this chapter.

[kireira]

Ah, was it alright? I thought that part was kinda cramped with 'voice of reason'-- the role that I just dumped to Nagase, lol.

Ken has the advantage of experience. =3 Though the Ken-Go pairing is a last-minute addition entirely based on one or two fanvids I accidentally saw on YouTube...

I plucked characters out of the air as I typed and it has somehow become full of V6, lol.

[fenlings]

Yay Ko-chan angst! Whoa, sniffing. Did that happen earlier and I just forgot about it? All this anticipation is delicious, but I really can't wait for things to move along! Also I kind of want Tsuyoshi to try to get to know Koichi better and see him outside of work as part of his Ohno-inspired communication plan, and Koichi misunderstand and think it's a date and there to be aaaaaaangst. Err. And then happiness. Yis.

[kireira]

Ah, the sniffing was a bit out of the blue indeed. ^^0 I think the last mention of the hair scent was in intro. Should go back and find some suitable scenes to insert the hint perhaps..

Nice idea. =D I have a different half-formed take on Tsuyoshi's attitude which I'm not sure will work out or not.. might be able to use that in some way. Thanks!

[fenlings]

Haha, when fics are WIP, I go into mosou mode! So like in my head Tsuyo and Koichi meet somewhere and after a while Tsuyo is all "omg this is great for my vision, lemme just adjust your hair with this flash of inspiration" and Koichi is all D: and leaves upset, prompting Tsuyo to be hit over the head with how oblivious and fail he is at communicating after all.

Then the next day Tsuyo corners Ko-chan and Ko-chan confesses and apologizes. And from then on it is AWKWARD and Tsuyo is all *aware* of Koichi and *careful* around him not to hurt him by seeming to be interested. And then somehow there is sex. Yes.

Hee, if only I had the fortitude to actually write this stuff to completion like other people! ::admires you::

[kireira]

Mosou mode, lol.

Tsuyo is all "omg this is great for my vision, lemme just adjust your hair with this flash of inspiration"
<3
I'll probably hijack some of these ideas for the next chapter! =DDD