[KinKi AU] Tangent -- Chapter 3

[kireira]

A decidedly gloomy chapter, so please have mental preparation...? =P

Disclaimer: This writing is fictional and has no commercial purpose. Characters are real persons belonging to themselves.

Pairing: KinKi Kids
Genre: AU, drama
Rating: G

Summary: Tsuyoshi the hairstylist was contracted to Kouichi the solo artist. Chapter 3: A rude awakening, a gentle

Comments

[anjenette]

I was actually listening to Aoyama Themla while reading. :)

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Seems like they're getting too attached with each other. But then, they have to separate for a while. Why is that? Just when they were starting to get closer. Though there is this saying that "Absence makes the heart grow fonder."

[kireira]

Eeeh. =D I only know that Soba ni Iru ne, but like it a lot. The reason I put her in is of course, because she's been on DK in reality, which ironically contradicts the setting of this fic, lol.

They have to separate so I can have my plot thickening, lol. But that proverb will come true in the next chapter! ^_^ *foreshadows*

[misosiru]

jıfklasfjsa its getting soooooooooooo much interesting *w*w*w*w* i want to read more and more!

but for some reason the idea of matsuoka and nagase was so cute i kind of want to see them together *w*w*w*w**w*w*. i never thought about maboxtomo before but sjdflksdjfkls *w*w*w*w* for some reason in your fic, i want iiiiiiiiit *w*w* -sparkles-

[kireira]

I seriously haven't meant for MaboxTomo, mostly because of my pre-conceived KKNagase triangle XD but also because they seem to be both S? XDD ...And NOW I somehow think of Nagase-Kou-Tsu-Mabo square.. D:

[misosiru]

*w*w*w* that sounds good tooooooooooooooooooooo. I kind of like the S S relationships too, seems real in a way also, probably beacuse i have gay friends who have relationships like that XDXDXD. ♥ *looks with sparkly eyes* *w*w*w*w*

[kireira]

Ah, love overrides stereotypes huh. =DDD S-S is interesting indeed.

Mabo is just a cameo-by-mention in current plan, but I do like him so it's not fixed that he won't appear again... Or, you're welcome to write a spin-off! =DDD

[gally04]

This is getting more and more interesting (^.^)

So many good ideas ^^ Angsty chapters are always hard to write lol, because you already think about the happy moments that will afterwards xD

Can't wait to read what the distance between those guys will create xD

Thanks a lot ^^

[kireira]

I've been worried that it would turn out too gloomy. =P All the conflicts get dumped here from the previous chapter... But Nagase is my oasis, lol.

Thanks for reading too!

[gally04]

Yup, I think Nagase is the oasis of fun always needed in a KinKi fic xD

Don't worry, it's not gloomy at all ! It's very cute ^^

[kireira]

Thanks. ^__^

[jandeth]

ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAY ^_^
Saved my day. Thanks.

I sort of can't get over the last part. I can see it all too clearly. I'm feeling this chapter, the whole chapter, all too well... relating too much, damn. ... ^_^

I got too absorbed into this that I can't really comment proreply.
I loved clueless Koichi.
I'll read this again tomorrow and actually coment something that makes sense.

[kireira]

You really made me feel so flattered! ^^ Thank you!

[jandeth]

You're welcome ^_^

Couldn't wait until tomorrow, so I read it again now.
I wonder if it is okay for me to say this...
The beginning of the second part, sort of kept "confusing" me, since you mention Miyake, and then move on to talk about different thing for half the part and only then mention Miyake again.

I love the idea of everyone pampering Tsuyo ^_^
AND EVERYONE SHOULD GIVE TSUYO CANDIES!!!

And clueless Koichi still made me go AWWWWW~ cute.

I like you style of not addressing Tsuyo's problems directly, since this is apparently supposed to be a "lighter" series(?). And you also kept this chapter light, with Koichi and Nagase's conversation (and Koichi being cute, and the CANDIES), albeit the mood being a bit darker overall.

[kireira]

Thanks for the detailed review! <33

Ah.. indeed I get carried off in that part, the 'flashback within flashback' from Taichi to Inocchi ^^;;; The first reference to Miyake then becomes just a means to start the topic about his public speaking phobia.. I'll see if there's any way to get around that. Thanks for letting me know!

I believe Tsuyoshi in real life is indeed a spoiled big kid. XD I base that on a Music Fair appearance (as Endlicheri) where he was being especially playful and telling random lies, and the exasperated host scolded him, "You're like this because everyone pampers you too much!" XD The bit about his manager giving him candies is from a KinKi You concert report.

[fishings]

Yay yay! update! *________* So many things I love about this fic, especially your characterizations and the way you have this great balance between your AU world and the parallels with Johnny's. I have no clue if I even know what I'm saying but you get the idea I hope. ♥! Poor Tsuyo, I hope he gets his drive back. Being in a slump is probably the worst thing that could happen to someone like him.

[kireira]

=DD I get the idea, thank you! ^_^ I spent too much time watching random videos and extracting random ideas...