[fic] Our Own Brand of Paradise - Chapter 6 Part B

[kirakiraayumi]

Title: Our Own Brand of Paradise
Pairings: YunJae, YooSu, YooSuMin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Smut, angst, mention of some really recent news (just in case you don't like it? I don't know why I'm warning.)
A/N: This chapter will be in three parts due to me wanting to get something out before college. Just in case I can't completely finish the chapter.

Comments

[iqinismail]

SPOT!!!!!! XD

[iqinismail]

omo omo omo was I first? I've never been first at leaving a comment! *runs around the house*

Okay, I'm back. haha I seriously hate the manager in this one. How can he be so freaking cruel?

And what Chun said about Jae being super attractive and is an easy victim got me laughing.

Am glad that they were still able to lift their spirits up what with all the manager and the last day approaching.

I squinted and I saw MinSu at the end. YAY FOR ME!!!! hehehe

[kirakiraayumi]

YAY FOR FIRST! *throws bunches of confetti*

I like it when people spot :D It makes me feel so cool. ♥

Manager should die. I'm glad you don't like him. ^^' Then again... I might be worried for anyone who does. XD

I was wondering if that part was a bit too forward. XD I'm glad you laughed! I felt a little insecure about forward Chun. It was followed by a bit of possessive Yunho though, which is fun. :)

I LOVE YOUR MINSU ICON. *random incoherent babbling sounds* ISSOCUTE ♥♥♥

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥♥♥

[kirakiraayumi]

Is there enough drama? XD

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you sooooo much for reading and commenting~! ♥

[vicshi]

can't believe it's almost the last day already T_T
poor jae is so stressed out but yun is understanding as always
look forward to more comfort!yunjae, its what i love d most about this fic ^^

[kirakiraayumi]

I know, right? I totally don't want it to end. >>; And I'm the one writing it. XD

YAY! ♥ You might be happy with the next part then. :D

Thank you so much for reading and commenting~ ♥

[your_lollidella]

How did i not see this D:
urgh stupid..manager. D:
I really like how you depict all the members in here & the chemistry they all have. Makes me really enjoy this.
♥

[kirakiraayumi]

♥ I skip over chapters all the time. It makes me sad when I do it... D:

I'm glad you like it! ♥ I'm hoping there'll be even more chemistry in the next part. It's like, exploding in my head.

...that sounded weird. ^^;

Thank you again for reading and commenting~! ♥

[sekushidesune]

Soooo Hey, I feel really bad about not commenting on every other chapter but I like couldn't stop for long enough, knowing that there was another chapter already up... (yeah thats how amazing I think this story is

[kirakiraayumi]

YAY LONG COMMENT ♥♥♥♥♥ Long comments totally overly make up for not commenting. I love long comments ♥

Another person who's read it straight like that?! Thank you so much! ♥♥♥

You like the 3? I think they're starting to grow on people, that makes me happy ♥ Yay Changmin bias! I don't think I have a bias yet... I always feel bad when I start liking someone because then I'm not liking the others enough. XD

He's such a jerk! I can't stand him >>; I... totally want your intimidating-Junsu quote underneath a picture. I have to find a suitable picture now. :P

Is it too much of a change between the stories? Sorry. XD I'm seriously thinking about them... and a smut scene... they deserve it. ^-^v Thank you soooo much! ♥♥♥♥

Spazzy long comments are my favorites♥♥♥♥♥ Thank you soooo much for reading and commenting!!