[Side-fic] Letters Home

Sep 12, 2010 01:33

Title: Letters Home
Pairings: YooSuMin, hints of Yunjae
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Angst, Junsu's mind in the gutter, mentions and small descriptions of smut but nothing horribly indepth as of yet.
A/N: Trying to relieve writers block and get some of the Yunjae-infecting YooSuMin out of my brain. You know it's dangerous when your Yunho starts telling ( Read more... )

*yoosu, our own brand of paradise, side-fic, *yoosumin

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dalia484 September 12 2010, 16:09:09 UTC
Since I am sick today and got way too bored just being in bed, I started looking for some new fics and I found this and "Our Own Brand of Paradise" and ended up reading both!

I really like the fic + this side shot. The storyline is very good - I love real life stories - and the (hinted) smut is very hot!

I especially like this letter idea,it's interesting to read their different styles of writing. ̶a̶̶n̶̶d̶̶ ̶̶i̶̶ ̶̶f̶̶e̶̶e̶̶l̶̶ ̶̶l̶̶i̶̶k̶̶e̶̶ ̶̶a̶̶ ̶̶p̶̶e̶̶r̶̶v̶̶e̶̶r̶̶t̶̶ ̶̶b̶̶e̶̶c̶̶a̶̶u̶̶s̶̶e̶̶ ̶̶i̶̶ ̶̶w̶̶a̶̶n̶̶t̶̶ ̶̶s̶̶o̶̶m̶̶e̶̶ ̶̶w̶̶e̶̶b̶̶c̶̶a̶̶m̶̶ ̶̶a̶̶c̶̶t̶̶i̶̶o̶̶n̶̶.̶

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kirakiraayumi September 13 2010, 03:18:38 UTC
Whoa. The end of your comment like freaked out. XD

Thank you so much for reading! I ♥ new readers. ♥♥♥♥ Hopefully you'll feel better soon! Though, if you had fun reading, maybe it was a good thing you got sick. lol just kidding! ♥

Ah, thank you~! I wonder if I should elaborate on the smut, given that Junsu and Changmin definitely seem to enjoy dropping hints here. I'm glad you like the letters! I hadn't thought about different writing styles... it's a good observation! :D

I'm really thinking about it, to be honest. But I haven't gone into detail in the main fic... we'll have to see ;P

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n3uromanc3r September 12 2010, 19:23:15 UTC
We can bake brownies and eat them off each other. Wouldn’t that be hot?

I can't decide which letter I liked more, because Yoochun's romantic style was so sweet but Junsu's words were also really enjoyable, I liked how Yoochun in his letter praised Junsu's skills, and of course it turned out he knows the other really well...

I don't know... I perfectly fine with the letters (I don't have patience to read messenger-style stories at all >.<), and I won't mind if you don't involve Yunho and Jae in this side story. I liked how they appeared in this chapter only indirectly.


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kirakiraayumi September 13 2010, 03:43:05 UTC
Yay~ Quoted ♥♥♥♥ I don't get quoted often. lol Thank you~

Maybe you'll be able to pick a favorite in the next few sets? lol ♥ I'm hoping their personalities will shine through a little more. I'm glad you liked the letters! ♥

I was liking the indirect Yunjae myself, kind of like they can have their own thing later... I'm glad you liked it as well! Messenger-style stories are... different. Sometimes they're amusing and sometimes they're... too much? If that makes sense.

Thank you soooo much for reading and commenting! ♥ substantial comments. :D

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bangable September 12 2010, 19:45:20 UTC
love it!!!

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kirakiraayumi September 13 2010, 03:43:25 UTC
Yay! I'm glad~ ♥♥♥ Thank you for reading and commenting~!

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kirakiraayumi September 13 2010, 03:44:35 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you loved it~ ♥

Scenes. I'm seriously thinking about it. Maybe a few one-shots... or a couple scenes here. I wonder if it would be oddly out of place here or something.

We'll have to see. :P

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

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iqinismail September 14 2010, 15:05:49 UTC
eeeeeeeep yoosumin side story! ♥ it!

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