Our Own Brand of Paradise - Chapter 6 Part A

[kirakiraayumi]

Title: Our Own Brand of Paradise
Pairings: YunJae, YooSu, YooSuMin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Smut, angst, mention of some really recent news (just in case you don't like it? I don't know why I'm warning.)
A/N: Finally broke 100 MS Word pages with this one :D Grand total of 115 pages, 62825 or so words in the whole thing. Am I in the big leagues yet? :

Comments

[your_lollidella]

Spot ♥

[kirakiraayumi]

Ooh, no one's save their spot on one of my fics before. ♥I think. XD

[your_lollidella]

I loved it ♥
I thought that scene was fine among other scenes kekeke~ =)
thanks for the update~

[kirakiraayumi]

Yay! That's what I was hoping to hear. :D ♥♥♥♥♥

Thank you for reading and commenting, again~ ♥

Enough Yunjae for the deprived soul? ♥

Our Own Brand of Paradise - Everything through Chapter 6 Part A

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[kirakiraayumi]

..? The heck?! I referenced my own post... it would be much more awesome if it didn't do this when I posted it. I'd love to know if someone reposted my stuff, that would be so flattering. <3

[ichigojae]

Mwoh? The last smut scene?? Noooo *wails*

Hi it's me again, commenting on the last chapter. Told ya I'd read everything tonight? XD Once a story caught my attention I can't stop reading. I just have to read and read and read. To be honest, I've stayed away from ff with story of their 3:2 separation... (yeah.. TT) but I am SO GLAD I read this one and I can't believe I'd actually enjoy reading yoosumin :p Club scene, nailed. Smut, success! Romance, in the air. Yunjae is full of love that it hurts so much to see them separated >.<

Oh the only thing I don't get is the manager though ^^;;

[kirakiraayumi]

Thank you soooooooo much for reading the whole thing! ♥♥♥♥♥ I do that too, when I get hooked on a story. :D Glad it's not just me~

Yes! I'm getting people to enjoy Yoosumin :D I was kinda 0.o when i started it, but it developed into something fun ♥ I'm glad that my story was good enough to flag you back down to fic fandom, even if only for a little bit. ♥ I came into fandom after the separation (LAME. LAMELAMELAME.) D: so I guess it doesn't affect me quite as much. *sigh*

Yay~ i nailed the club scene! Considering I've never been in one before, I feel as though I have achieved something. XD

Yeah, that manager thing... not sure what's going on there myself. I'm thinking about a second story to follow this one, and the plot bunnies are telling me it could be foreshadowing. Yay plot devices! ^^;

Again, thank you soooooooo much for reading and commenting! It means even more because you managed to read the whole thing! You just read, like, a mini-novel or something. lol Thank you thank you thank you!

[ichigojae]

I posted my additional comment before I saw your reply :P Well to be honest, I came into the fandom after separation too so that makes us double LAME? LOL... but I don't know I guess deep down I really want to see them together. I guess I fall in love too much with Yunjae that I couldn't fathom how they are separated hahaha me and my fangirl mind :P thanks for writing! Looking forward for your update ^^

[kirakiraayumi]

It's all good! I'll reply to both~ ♥ Um, this one first? XD

Another person with the same bad luck! ♥♥♥♥ Those are sympathy hearts. XD lol~ Yes, Yunjae are amazing. So much fun. Does this mean I can't share the awesome JYJ live clip I just saw? D: I was like 'omg i have to share this hey look someone commented *tackle*' XD But it really is heartwrenching. There's some rumor flying around about a comeback, but it was so unsubstantial that I was pretty skeptical.

Now the other one:

omg I don't even know where that came from. (^///^) It must be my Intoxication side showing. XD

[ichigojae]

Sorry correction, your latest chapter, not last :p

Oh and the part where Junsu was telling Chun that he has told Yunho about "some tips to deal with a little fox" that one is epic~! Unforgettable.. how did you come up with this stuff XDDD

[kirakiraayumi]

I was hoping the whole Yoosumin thing would come across well there! I'm glad you liked it~ ♥

Ah, thank you ♥♥♥ I'm not sure it's that good. ♥

Thank you for reading and commenting, again! ♥