Our Own Brand of Paradise - Chapter 5 Part A

[kirakiraayumi]

Title: Our Own Brand of Paradise
Pairings: YunJae, YooSu, YooSuMin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Smut and a bit of snark from Junsu and Changmin. :D
Genre: Romance, slight Angst
A/N: This piece is HUGE. not just this chapter, but the whole thing so far. This chapter is shorter, I'm kinda sad. Still long though! I won't let you down there ;D
Summary:

Comments

[bheluvdbsk]

Hi, new reader here...
Wow,, i love this fanfic...hehehe i love changmin in this fanfic still food monster...every yunjae scenes are so sweet and touchy...update soon please...really good fanfic <3 u

[kirakiraayumi]

Yay! Thank you for reading! Welcome to the monstrosity that is this giant fic. :D

I'm glad you love it! lol, Changmin is always associated with food, isn't he? XD

I should be updating soon! It's intense trying to get this chapter done, it's taking forever~ ♥

Thank you sooooo much for reading and commenting!

[hitomi2oo7]

OMONA! I love how you write longer and longer parts <3<3<3
And I really like when they all are together coz the story is so funny and full of energy when you put them all together! ^^~
Thank you for all your hard work babe *hugs* :3

[kirakiraayumi]

Oh, that's a good thing? It isn't annoying? YAY~~~ ♥♥♥

I want to put more of those scenes~ especially because it might be nearing the end D: I'm glad you like them!

*hugs back* Thank you for recognizing it~! I'll continue to work hard~! 。（＾-＾）。

[vicshi]

I really love how caring Yun is towards Jae in this series, it's so intense it's almost aching. Look forward to the next part :)

[kirakiraayumi]

Ooh, intense and aching? I don't think I've had that terminology applied yet. :D Thank you for that!

The Yunjae scenes are really intense to write. It's where and if to cut it off that's hard. T_T; I'm glad you like it! He's struck me as a person with a really big heart. ♥

Thank you for reading and commenting~! I'm trying to finish this quickly... >>;

[rethzneworld]

wtf! stupid old manager! he manhandled our boys! he deserves to die *send out voodoo to him*

[kirakiraayumi]

I love your reaction! ♥♥♥ It's very intense. ^-^

I had trouble writing that, because it was almost like they were helpless. i wonder where it even came from ^^;

I'm sure karma will come back to him. *nods* Maybe not yet... maybe in another series... but it will.

*evil laugh*

[rainycakes]

UGH! Every time Yun and Jae are about to get it on for our reading pleasure, someone interrupts them! D< *ahem* Excuse the horny crazy fangirl-esque reaction there. Heh...

Anywho, I wanted to slap-a-hoe when that so called "manager" put his hands on the boys. And what kind of freak would sniff Jae's hair like that? Gawd!
...I mean, besides me, of course. lol But that's different! Somehow...

Aish, I hope the boys can let loose and relax and have some fun at the club. :D And yunjae can finally friggin get their freak on in peace! With us reading all about it, of course. ;oP

[kirakiraayumi]

BEST REACTION EVER. You're totally not saying everything that I think and never want to actually write down in my comments. ♥♥♥

They did succeed once... in like chapter 2 or 3 I think. :) We can just always blame Changmin. It seems fitting to blame the child. XD Although I'm sure Junsu gets a kick out of it too.

lol! I know, right? He's super creepy. Which would totally explain why they wanted to get rid of him.

Hmm... fun... we can call it that. ;) It might be even more interesting than you're expecting~ XD I'm travelling out of my own comfort zone, it looks like.

thank you for reading and commenting!!!!

[rainycakes]

Oh I was most definitely blaming Minnie for those interruptions. With Junsu and Yoochun it was more like, seriously guys? Seriously?! Like you don't know what's about to go down?! Ugh.

Oooh, I'm not too sure what to think about out-of-comfort-zone "fun". Not that you can't handle it (cuz I really dig your writing :)), just more on the lines of can I handle it. My mind wanders to the threesome zone when you mention that kind of fun. *cough*JaexYunxThirdparty*cough*, perhaps? I mean, aside from the obvious Yoosumin thing going on, that is. I, personally, like Jae and Yun just the way they are in your fic, but let's face it - you put them getting freaky with someone else added in and I'm still gonna read it. I may not like it! But I'll still read it. lol

Argh! I'm beside myself with theories and excitement to know what's going to happen. ^^

[kirakiraayumi]

lol! I think Junsu just likes to be the only one getting any walk in at all the inopportune moments. XD

Oh, thank you for liking my writing! whoo~ :) Ah, it looks like my brain might've stopped it anyway. I must say that you weren't quite on the right track... although, you do get to see Yunho interact with a third party. ;) How so, I cannot yet reveal.

I want to finish this chapter so bad. They write themselves, so to speak, so sometimes I get a wall of text and sometimes a few lines. I'll try to hurry~ ^^;