little kissy's little ficlet

[kiradyn_rhiode]

i've been wondering if i should post the entire thing up at one shot, or in little parts.

because currently, it's in one document, but each segment is ficlet/drabble-sized. not very long, easy to read (if you can get past the frogs hopping around on the ceiling and the fishes swimming through his hair and hiding from the butteflies).

so... how? :

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[kiradyn_rhiode]

some parts read rather oddly. don't know how i'd fix it and if i should attempt to. :0

[kiradyn_rhiode]

X3 thanks.

i'm still wondering if i should just post up the segments that feel okay and leave out the odd ones, or to edit the weird ones, or to just rewrite those bits from scratch. :\