And I'm stumped.

Oct 10, 2007 14:15

Another piece from my writing group.

I have no idea what to make of this one...

It's called Goggles for Lulu

First three pages )

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elliemurasaki October 10 2007, 21:37:21 UTC


Quote:The canapés had been delectable and tea just right and the sky wore an Alma-Tadema blue, dotted now and again with clouds so uniform in whiteness and puff that one could imagine cherubim holding shining brass trumpets to their supernaturally plump backsides, flatulating perfect balls of holy steam for the amusement of the locals.

*falls over laughing*

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kippurbird October 11 2007, 01:27:49 UTC
Isn't it bizzare?

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elliemurasaki October 11 2007, 01:44:12 UTC
Hilariously bizarre.

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kippurbird October 11 2007, 18:01:07 UTC
It's so bizarre that I'm not certain how to respond to it constructively.

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thelittlebudgie October 10 2007, 21:48:49 UTC
I started reading Pride and Prejudice for school this weekend. This vaguely reminds me of it. Amusing, if you take it from the right angle, but rather odd.

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kippurbird October 11 2007, 01:28:39 UTC
Yeah. It does feel like that... I'm not certain what to make of it.

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the_norseman October 10 2007, 22:08:26 UTC
This is certainly very peculiar... some sort of parody I assume? It has got to be, it has me reading it not because I like it so much but rather because... it's so very peculiar.

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kippurbird October 11 2007, 01:29:56 UTC
It's supposed to be a humor piece, so take that as you will. But yes, I have the same feeling.

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karma_kalisutah October 10 2007, 22:37:18 UTC
What is this person on an where can I get some?

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kippurbird October 11 2007, 01:30:22 UTC
I don't know, but if I find out tomorrow I'll let you know! =D

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anonymous October 11 2007, 01:23:35 UTC
Hehe! I like it!

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kippurbird October 11 2007, 01:30:57 UTC
That's one of us. I don't dislike it... I just don't know what to make of it.

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