Fan Fiction UNLEASHED...not for the sex timid...

[kinkyjedi]

ok, not much happened the last week as I was sickly the whole time but now I'm back and feel like writing some official horny tales. I'm debuting one below...read, enjoy and let me know if you think I have a professional future:

Comments

[nighteyes_70]

Ohh it's all about the end!!!

Way to go pancho, I particularly like the strawberrrries! Meow!

Keep em comming ... and cumming.

It's all about the end...

[kinkyjedi]

I wasn't sure how to end it so I thought about her being "experienced" and all and figured...hmmm, maybe she should give him a tip. Plus, I had to really make the story short due to time and make it a quick read for input so it was a perfect way to play with how short it was. Listen to me sounding all analytical and shit. The story got me some so it can't be that bad! LOL!

Ohhh... mama likes!

[inanna_astrea]

Anyone up for strawberries? I like that shit! LOL Good story kinkyjedi. Ba-da da da da I'm lovin it.

Re: Ohhh... mama likes!

[kinkyjedi]

By the way, I'm really digg'n the avatar, cat chick!

Re: Ohhh... mama likes!

[kinkyjedi]

Yeah, I wanted to put something in it like:

"Ohhhh, OOOHHHH, OOOOOOOHHHHHHH.....shiiiiiiit...blap."

Maybe I'll put it in the next story I write. I didn't get many comments on it, though. I don't know if everyone read it or just us horny bastards..lol!