"Good?" Chekov/Sulu NC-17

Jan 08, 2010 06:12

Title: Good?
Author: kinkme
Pairing: Chekov/Sulu
Rating: NC-17 (PWP)
Summary: Hikaru is determined to get Pavel to top, even if that means using something to help him with his problem. For this prompt on the kinkmeme.

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chekov/sulu, the cockring saga continues..., leaving the inertial dampener on, fanfiction

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chico_babe January 8 2010, 08:43:14 UTC
Definitly "best" your porn just gets hotter and hotter. I wish I had a million thumbs so I could give you a millions thumbs up :D

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kinkme January 8 2010, 17:09:44 UTC
Thanks!

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alimccann January 8 2010, 08:48:58 UTC
" About eighteen inches in diameter"

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Otherwise, I quite enjoyed this.

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kinkme January 8 2010, 17:08:32 UTC
CRAP.

Sorry, urgh. Fixed. So much fail.

Thanks! XD

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crystalshard January 8 2010, 11:30:09 UTC
How do you make PWP this sweet and affectionate? I really like how you're showing Chekov's increasing desperation.

Also, I love the phrase 'the refractory period of a warp core engine '. It just fits, somehow.

Also, eighteen inches? Are we talking some kind of alien anatomy here?

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kinkme January 8 2010, 17:09:22 UTC
*Pokes above message*

I swear I said centimetres. I obviously fail. That's how the space shuttle exploded, don't you know. '^.^

Thanks!

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crystalshard January 8 2010, 17:17:18 UTC
That makes more sense. And I don't know about space shuttles, but you're right about the Mars lander.

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kinkme January 8 2010, 17:38:15 UTC
I promise not to leave the inertial dampener on any more.

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rubynye January 8 2010, 13:07:50 UTC
What happened to the rest of my comment?! Anyway, it gives me a chance to rephrase.

Pavel knew he was being investigated for any reaction. Hikaru always did this in bed. Checking and double-checking he wasn't crossing any lines.

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! That just got me through the heart.

God, I love how you write them. Even at their raunchiest they retain their essential sweetness.

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kinkme January 8 2010, 17:39:30 UTC
Thank you! They're just too sweet.

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hollycomb January 8 2010, 16:54:12 UTC
omgggggggggggggggggggggggggg D: that was so hot! This is exactly the kind of hesitant but then eager top!Pavel that I love and omg cock rings are always a welcome addition to S/C fic as far as I'm concerned, heh.

I love your fics! You always write sex so well and meaningfully. :)

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kinkme January 8 2010, 17:42:32 UTC
Aw, thanks!

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