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“You’re sure you want this, Arthur?” Merlin forces himself to ask. “You don’t have to prove anything to me, there are other things we can-”
“God, please, I’ve been fingering myself in the shower and pretending it’s you for weeks, please“…Ok. Then get up, we’re going to the bedroom to do this properly. I won’t just have you on the couch like it doesn’t matter ( ... )
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Now re-posted here - http://community.livejournal.com/mad_poetics/2541.html - with minor editing to the beginning because I failed at time zones on the first attempt. :D
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And of course the ending just makes happy bubble inside me, because it's so cute.
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This was a wonderful, hot, believable fic! I loved it! So much!!
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I love the background and character-building, all the people Merlin runs into besides Morgana and Gwen, (Gaius! Uther being called Maurice!) and I really like the way you build the relationship between Merlin and Arthur bit by bit. The conversation where Arthur admits he doesn't like girls felt very natural to me, awkward the way these things tend to be.
Also loved Arthur being a ridiculous, intentional tease. Oh, and when Arthur finally gets Merlin in bed? Really, really hot. Just. wfhfffff.
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and the way you wrote was fun and super HOT *UNF*
Amazing job !
LOVE the last lines !
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