Fic: "A Matter of Opinion" (Sora and Roxas, #1)

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Title: A Matter of Opinion
Author: SorraDragonEyesClaim: Sora/Roxas

Comments

[orchida]

I find the whole Roxas/Sora em...thing? interesting, is Roxas seperate, joined, or what, so it's good to see other's interpretations of the relationship.

I loved the way that you had Roxas still questioning his other, watching him in battle and seeing for his self what makes Sora what he is. I loved how you made the keyblade a being (so to speak) as well, I don't think I've come across that before. Oooh, loved the line - created from this simple minded boy So true :)

[wickedorin]

I enjoyed it. It's kinda nice to have Roxas and Sora together, but still separate--and not necessarily at odds, but not quite agreeing.

[doomweasel]

I like what you have going here - especially the descriptions of the keyblade and the battles - but I think you explained things a little to explicitly in the end. I think it'd be better if you were a little more vague instead of spelling things out completely.