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toxique_amour in kingdom_spork

Build God, Then We'll Talk

Aug 18, 2007 01:58

Build God, Then We’ll Talk (Part 1)

Title: Build God, Then We'll Talk
Author: SilverPeacock
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Comments 14

xxmyfearsmylies August 18 2007, 15:15:14 UTC

Riku: If we’re lucky, she might die in her sleep.

My eyes snapped open.

Riku: Damn

That was great. xD

And the "FOUND" part literally made me do a spit take.

Great sporking!

cool_rain_kiss August 18 2007, 19:51:16 UTC

Nice sporking. But I am wondering why people are still using this community. XD

Homie say wha? cool_rain_kiss October 26 2007, 17:31:31 UTC

Wait... is there a new one? I was sort of wondering why it had suddenly slowed down.

Re: Homie say wha? cool_rain_kiss October 26 2007, 19:02:08 UTC

It should be listed in the userinfo, and I'm at work and can't check definitely on this (even though I'm a mod; Jesus I suck!), but it should be heartless_fics. I'm definitely sure it's those words. Just not sure if it has an underscore or not.

toxique_amour August 18 2007, 22:21:15 UTC

Thanks a ton! ^__^

Ha-ha, I didn't see any of the other communities earlier. I just found Heartless_fics right before I posted this comment actually. o.0

((I'm new to LJ. Well, that's my excuse at any rate.))

anonymous August 22 2007, 23:25:12 UTC

It appears the fic has already been deleted o.O

toxique_amour August 28 2007, 21:38:16 UTC

yeah, I saw that yesterday. It happened not too long after someone posted a bit of a nasty comment. Maybe it was someone who read my spork since it was a couple days after I posted this. Or maybe not, whatever.

I already wrote everything up though, I just need to edit it and have my friends beta it. (Which I don't think they really want to anymore, considering they don't even play KH. I need internet friends/fans-of-the-game... 0.o)

So..does that mean I can still spork it since I already wrote it out?

(I seriously have no conscience...)

ceylon_tae August 29 2007, 16:14:50 UTC

Um... If you can't find anyone, and if it wouldn't bother you, I could see if I could beta it for you. I usually end up proofreading my little sisters' essays anyway, and this would probably be more fun. :)

toxique_amour August 31 2007, 00:08:50 UTC

Oh wow! Really? I wouldn't mind at all ^_^

That'd be fantastic-thanks! :D

(I've never had a real beta reader, so...you might need to explain a few things if you don't mind.)

Should I just email the next chapter to you?

Thread 5

therikkubop September 7 2007, 11:27:07 UTC

Hang on, I see a little continuity error here. She's a slave to his heart, and he becomes a Nobody. Zexion has no heart. Did this author forget a thing called "continuity"?!

therikkubop September 7 2007, 21:57:36 UTC

*Throws hands into the air and shakes head*

Apparently. I decided to not try and understand it, it made my brain hurt and the KH player inside of me was screaming in agonizing torture.

(Ha-ha just kidding about the, let's say "drama" , but yeah...I have no idea what happened to that point. It ran away and never came back in the fic to make sense.)

toxique_amour September 7 2007, 22:02:32 UTC

Ugh, that comment above was me. I forgot to log-in. >.>