Fiction story...

[kingbob]

The dawn broke over the eastern horizon, a bleeding orb into the unready sky. I stood on the rail of the bridge, replaying the events that brought me to this point in my life. My body fought my brain as the images flashed before my eyes

Comments

[mckrycek]

How lovely to find this waiting on my flist when I signed on this evening!
I really do love your writing style here/ It
is so visceral. So *visual*! I could just see the bridge, feel the cold, agonize with him as he walked. Feel my stomach rise into my throat as he jumped. I actually gasped when Jake grabbed him!
Absolutely amazing!
Rachel is a *SAINT*.
I am just amazed. Truly! I loved it!!!!!
Thank you SO much for sharing.

[strlteangel]

you've made some changes since the last copy i've seen. which i still have by the way. its still a good story. are you going to continue it? maybe give a back story behind each character? just an idea. laters, StrLte